Spitllama's arrangements (Paper Mario TTYD "Story of The Thousand-Year Door")

[spitllama]

Critiques are welcomed!

The Legend of Zelda

The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass-
Ocean King's Theme (requested by Globety)
Original
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The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess-
Darknut (requested by Jet Blankett)
Original
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The Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker-
Phantom Ganon (replacement)
Original
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Wind Temple
Original
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The Legend of Zelda: 25th Anniversary-
Great Fairy's Fountain Theme (also arranged by fingerz)-(requested by Meta-Ridley)
Original
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Gerudo Valley (requested by Meta-Ridley)
Original
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Kakariko Village (requested by Meta-Ridley)
Original
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Metroid

Metroid Fusion-
Crisis Mission (requested by metroidhunter)
Original
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Pokemon

Pokemon Battle Revolution-
Sunset Colosseum
Original
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Pokemon Black 2 & White 2-
Battle! Colress (requested by November)
Original
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Musical "MELOETTAAA!"
Original
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Pokemon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum Versions-
The Distortion/Torn World (requested by vinalexander and Nebbles)
Original
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Research Lab
Original
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Villa ・ Twinleaf Music Box!
Original
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Super Mario

Mario and Luigi Partners in Time-
Princess Shroob Battle (requested by SlowPokemon)
Original
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Mario Party 7-
Pagoda Peak (requested by MasterPro-X)
Original
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Mario Superstar Baseball-
Menu Theme
Original
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Paper Mario-
Freeze! (requested by iShaade)
Original
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Star Spirits' Request (requested by kartiomart)
Original
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Paper Mario and the Thousand Year Door-
Poshley Heights (requested by NintendoPianoGirl)
Original
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Shadow Siren Scuffle (first arrangement evah)
Original
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Story of the Thousand-Year Door
Original
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Title Theme (to come before and flow with PianoMan's arrangement of "File Select")
Original (0:00-0:23)
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Super Mario Galaxy 2-
Clock Time Attack (requested by edgarox)
Original
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Super Paper Mario-
Champion of Destruction (replacement) (requested by FireArrow)
Original
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Closing Battle (requested by Ganondorf)
Original
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Overthere Shrine (requested by Nebbles)
Original
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Super Smash Bros.

Super Smash Bros. Brawl-
Boss Theme Medley
Original
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Bramble Blast (replacement)
Original
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King Dedede's Theme
Original
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The Roost
Original
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Misc.

Disney & Pixar's Up-
Married Life
Original
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Radiant Historia-
Where the Wind and Feathers Return (requested by Roz~)
Original
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Rayman Origins-
Lum King
Original
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Rocket: Robot on Wheels-
Jojo's World (requested by mariomagic22)
Original
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Xenoblade Chronicles-
One Who Gets in Our Way
Original
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In Progress:

Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days- (requested by MusicMeister47)
Another Side -Battle Ver.-
Original


To-Do List (Requests always completed first)

Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep-
Dismiss
Original

Kingdom Hearts II-
The Encounter
Original

The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask-
Final Hours
Original

The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword-
Levias Battle
Original
Mini-Boss Battle Theme (Variation 1)
Original

The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess-
Twilit Ice Mass Blizzeta
Original

The Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker-
Molgera Battle
Original

Rayman Origins-
Boss Plant
Original

Super Paper Mario-
Bounding Through Time
Original

[spitllama]

"The Distortion World" has been added and is in need of comments/critiques

[JDMEK5]

Post the Midi and I might be able to help you.

[spitllama]

K done. I had some struggles given the limitations of the piano compared to the techno of the original so all help is much appreciated.

[Shadoninja]

distortion world

measure 7 - the right hand is impossible to play due to that E which also seems to tie to the air. the ties from measure 9-13 feel a bit cluttered.

you don't need all those bass notes sustained for extremely long periods of time. I'd make them 2 measures long at the most and then reintroduce them by having them be played again or if you intend for that part to be silent, fill with rests. bar 11 should be fine though.

measures 32-64: I'd limit the appearance of those tubular bell notes. they get really difficult to play and a bit annoying. for example, beat 3 of measure 33 and measures 38-39.

measure 37: extremely long fingers required on beat 3. I'd remove the low E.

Measure 48-49: I don't think the Bb needs to appear on the beat 3s at all.

measure 56-62: you should put those tied notes in another layer with the appropriate note duration.

overall, don't use too many ties as it makes the arrangement look cluttered and confusing.

[spitllama]

Thanks again shado. One difficulty I've been having is tying a whole note over a set of notes actually being played. Finale thinks I'm trying to add extra beats to the measure (that's why I've been making ties separated by the value of the notes below it). Anyone know how to do this?

[SlowPokemon]

You'll see 1, 2, 3, and 4 in the corner, these are layers. Place the whole note, then click on the second layer to add notes underneath it. You'll figure it out. Don't forget to change back to the first layer.

[Shadoninja]

a quick shortcut for layers is ALT+SHIFT+1/2/3/4. it's much easier than clicking on the tiny numbers

[spitllama]

Gracias

[spitllama]

K I fixed the Distortion World and I'd like to submit it if it's correct now I'm specifically still questioning the first two measures.

[spitllama]

Princess Shroob Battle theme has been posted and is in need of comments/critiques

[SlowPokemon]

Good arrangement, a few big problems that I don't feel like outlining right now. xD I just want you to know I've seen it. I will try and give feedback soon. Thank you.

[spitllama]

Cool thanks Slow

[spitllama]

"The Roost" has been added. First duo arrangement Critiques are always welcomed

[Olimar12345]

Roost needs to be in 3/4, not 6/8 btw.