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Author Topic: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario  (Read 508 times)

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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #15 on: June 06, 2018, 07:59:29 PM »

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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #16 on: June 09, 2018, 06:38:57 PM »

I'm hearing coolest.

I can tell you without a shadow of a doubt that the official lyrics are cruelest. Brawl changed it to coolest, but the original was cruelest. It's hard to tell because of the poor audio quality.


Stay tuned, I'm about to check the sheet for other errors.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #17 on: June 09, 2018, 08:02:42 PM »

I assume the piano is supposed to be the instruments in the background? If so, one thing I noticed is that in some parts when Ashley sings, namely m5 and any similar, there is a vibraphone or something playing along with the singing. Now, I wouldn't mention it if not for the fact it always place the same phrase even when the rhythms change for what Ashley sings.

Also, it's "You better learn my name 'cause I am" with the You on beat 4.5 in the previous measure, for both times this phrase appears (m4-5 & m53-54). Also, commas do not go before the word "beacuse" in English grammar, even if it's shortened to 'cause.

And the last measure. The LH has a quarter note pattern going Bb minor chord-F minor chord-Octave Bb. And the RH should probably be played in octaves as well. You could also have the last quarter in the LH be a chord, but that's up to you.

Now, I can't figure out how to edit the lyrics without messing everything up, but here's a file with the other edits I mentioned. If you disagree with anything I've said, don't hesitate to speak up about you're viewpoint.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #18 on: June 09, 2018, 09:47:29 PM »

I hear what you're saying about the vibraphone  and I agree with all of your changes
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #19 on: June 09, 2018, 10:25:57 PM »

I hear what you're saying about the vibraphone  and I agree with all of your changes
Alright. You (or an anyone really) will have to fix the lyrics, since I broke everything when I tried to.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #20 on: June 15, 2018, 03:01:30 PM »

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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #21 on: June 15, 2018, 03:10:36 PM »

I can tell you without a shadow of a doubt that the official lyrics are cruelest. Brawl changed it to coolest, but the original was cruelest. It's hard to tell because of the poor audio quality.

Also, it's "You better learn my name 'cause I am" with the You on beat 4.5 in the previous measure, for both times this phrase appears (m4-5 & m53-54). Also, commas do not go before the word "beacuse" in English grammar, even if it's shortened to 'cause.

Alright. You (or an anyone really) will have to fix the lyrics, since I broke everything when I tried to.
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