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Author Topic: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario  (Read 968 times)

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[NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« on: April 04, 2018, 08:50:42 PM »

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Series: Super Mario
Game: WarioWare: Touched!
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Ashley's Song
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario
« Last Edit: July 17, 2018, 06:06:22 AM by BrainyLucario »
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2018, 08:51:20 PM »


2 years,,,,,two freaking years to do this.....
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2018, 11:06:24 PM »

Big thing I noticed that needs to be changed, the section in F# major/D# minor is in straights, not swing like the rest of the song.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #3 on: April 05, 2018, 12:09:23 AM »

I cant do that with Notepad
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2018, 01:32:16 AM »

Then ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2018, 01:45:53 AM »

Then ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2018, 03:15:38 AM »

Then ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
Oh I know, that was me asking for help secretly. If no one noticed it I would've asked Olimar or Sebastian to help
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2018, 05:31:14 AM »

Oh I know, that was me asking for help secretly. If no one noticed it I would've asked Olimar or Sebastian to help

That’s not how you ask
 
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #8 on: April 10, 2018, 11:22:44 PM »

Anyways, it's fixed now
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #9 on: May 03, 2018, 02:14:44 PM »

Who's the up-dater who will re-view this sheet?
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2018, 12:15:18 PM »

Nobody completed the second verse. Sad. Anyways bump
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #11 on: May 17, 2018, 01:08:12 PM »

Double-check your lyrics with this source.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2018, 03:49:47 AM »

I'm hearing coolest.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #13 on: May 18, 2018, 04:03:49 AM »

Not so much what the references hear vs. what you hear, but more of some polishing up of the lyrics you've written. Here's an example of what I mean:



This could look much better as ASH - LEY!, with the first syllable stretching over beats 1 & 2. We could also try and figure out when to indicate a chorus line (such as that name pictured,) unless this is purely a solo; in that case, I'd try to mark some special kind of indication for how it might be sung with more contrast. I'm no expert at arranging vocal music, but I thought it might be worth throwing out there.
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Re: [NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario
« Reply #14 on: May 18, 2018, 12:09:35 PM »

I honestly feel like though it would look better, having it like A-ASH-LEY More clearly expresses how your supposed to stress the syllables when singing it. Also the choir chords thing are in the piano section down below. I felt that since this is a piano website the piano should be the focus to where the chords are not given to the voice. The contrast addition is beyond me, since I'm no expert in arranging vocal music either
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