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Author Topic: [NDS] Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version - "Striaton City" (Replacement) by Latios212  (Read 260 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Striaton City
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
« Last Edit: May 27, 2018, 04:04:20 PM by Latios212 »
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Original:

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Yo, awesome sheet! Don't know why this one hasn't been responded to yet.

A couple things:
- Any reason why the mp is so over to the left? If there is, keep it. If not, I'd recommend putting it directly under/above the first notes.
- M. 17 (beat 2; RH): I hear a harmony that you could add starting on the E (the first 16th note).

Nice work.
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Thanks!

- Any reason why the mp is so over to the left? If there is, keep it. If not, I'd recommend putting it directly under/above the first notes.
Yeah whoops I originally had it beamed differently and forgot to move the dynamic back. Fixed.

- M. 17 (beat 2; RH): I hear a harmony that you could add starting on the E (the first 16th note).
This was intentional to avoid quick parallel thirds.
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Great!

In that case, I approve.
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-About the missing sixteenth notes in measure 17: You should add those in even if you make them optional, it sounds weird without them. It isn’t that hard to play; it certainly wouldn't be arrangement-breaking. Maybe make them small note heads and a note saying they’re optional would do. It would be nice to at least have the option.
-I would highly recommend a D.C. in this piece, more than I would in other submissions, simply because it's a sight-reader's trap to see a repeat bar at the end and want to go back to measure 3 (where the tune starts). This piece is unique in that it repeats the two-bar introduction every time through, which the D.C. would greatly help address.
-You left out the pick up to the D.C. which makes the repeat seem weirdly abrupt. I would recommend adding that and at the least marking it "play on D.C. only" or something similar indicating that.

Everything else appears to be fine. Well done.
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All fair points. The thirds are fine to put in; I'd personally just ignore them when playing. Good point about the D.C. in this one; I can see how that'd add some clarity for this song in particular. And the pickup to the D.C. was an oversight that I forgot to add in.

Thanks for checking! Files updated.
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This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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