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Author Topic: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory  (Read 355 times)

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[Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« on: February 23, 2018, 03:26:52 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: New Super Mario Bros. Wii
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Staff Roll
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Gzgregory
« Last Edit: July 06, 2018, 05:05:48 AM by Greg »
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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2018, 03:28:17 PM »


Solo version of this arrangement.

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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2018, 02:31:15 PM »

There are some formatting errors going on here.
-For the composers, you've got it stretched out, hit the enter key there if you would!

-Your title needs to include quotation marks, This also goes for the title on the top of the second page and onward

-In the copyright section, just Capitolize the N the S and the M if you would!

I may give it a listen later to give more feedback, but it looks decent from what i can see


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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2018, 04:02:32 PM »

Alright, fixed, along with some other minor readability issues.

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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2018, 10:06:33 AM »

Just doing a quick overview:
m.5 - dotted quarter + staccato looks weird, and the same idea could be accomplished with quarter + staccato then an eighth rest
m.50 - without context in the pdf, it leaves an unprepared player wondering what's going on. Could possibly add the dialogue in italics?
m.88 - you should write this down as a tremolo instead
m.147 and likewise - tenutos clashing with triplets
m.181 - rests clashing with clefs

I haven't listened too closely to the chords yet, but this should give you some idea of some stuff to patch up
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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2018, 11:49:57 AM »

Fixed (hopefully I didn't miss a stray dotted quarter staccato somewhere).

I also modified m.87-88 to make it more reflective of the most prominent voice in that section.

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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2018, 03:48:21 PM »

This should be written with swung 8th notes, which would also make it much easier to read.
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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2018, 07:34:45 PM »

You're absolutely right and I'm not sure how I missed that. Fixed.

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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2018, 09:23:58 PM »

Nice work!
I'd change the time signature and tempo marking to cut time and half note = 112. It feels really weird to count the tempo in 4 beats, but way more natural in 2.
You also missed some grace notes in a few places, and some staccato markings are missing or are incorrect. Take another listen to the original and see what places you can fix.

m. 40 and 44: Change the Ab in the L.H. into a G#, like you did in m. 36. The same problem occurs later on in the score too.
m. 51-82: Change all the L.H. Eb's into D#'s and G's into Fx's. That will save some accidental markings.
m. 80-85: I think one mf marking should be sufficient
m. 105: You missed a tie here on the low Eb
m. 116: Change the L.H. C# and G# into Db and Ab
m. 118 and beyond: In the original, there's a little F bass note and a small grace note piano thingy from D# to F after this F7/C chord.

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Re: [Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Staff Roll" by Gzgregory
« Reply #9 on: July 06, 2018, 05:06:02 AM »

Updated, thanks for your comments!

I actually disagree with changing the accidentals in m. 51-82: I think the way it's notated represents the intended interpretation of the intervals in that section better (in particular avoiding the usage of augmented 2nds). I left that as is for now but I'm open to changing it if others agree!
 

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