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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 200 times)

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[Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« on: February 21, 2018, 07:59:58 PM »

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Series: Other
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Shrimp Shuffle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2018, 08:02:07 PM »


A fun, simple one. Did some bullshitting somewhere though, as the original transcription ruined the tonality a bit.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2018, 09:51:39 PM »

Bump.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2018, 08:17:55 PM »

I think the bassline doesn't capture the oomph of the original. If you're ok with that, it's your arrangement.
However, I think it might be better if it was something like this:
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2018, 10:15:51 PM »

I think the bassline doesn't capture the oomph of the original. If you're ok with that, it's your arrangement.
That's fair enough I guess.

However, I think it might be better if it was something like this:
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Ah M.9-16. With that section (and the similar one at the end), I intentionally made it less loud and bouncy taking the whole piece into consideration. Without it, there's not enough of the contrast present in the original imo.
I still had a listen to what you offered regardless, but it seems awfully difficult, and there's too much clutter in the bass (just a personal thing, other people quite like that). Typically I wouldn't pair mezzoforte with staccato'd 4-note chords in the bass.

Thanks for the suggestion anyway.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2018, 10:33:06 PM »

Fair enough.

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2018, 08:19:56 AM »

Bump I guess.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2018, 10:36:57 AM »

Bump again, I suppose.
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I've fully checked the song, and aside from my gripes about the bassline in that part, I only found one issue: you put staccato marks on dotted notes. Yes, it may make the sheet cleaner, but those are two additions to the note that affect each other in opposite ways. What good does a dot do when its goal is to lengthen the note, but the staccato's job is to shorten it? Try writing them as something else with rests also thrown in.
 

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