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Author Topic: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345  (Read 209 times)

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Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Epilogue
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345
« Last Edit: February 14, 2018, 05:41:48 AM by Olimar12345 »
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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2018, 08:02:56 PM »

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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 08:36:06 PM »

Nice work! Some comments:
- Composer: shouldn't Koji Kondo be listed too?
- Given all the emptiness in the measures at the beginning I'd suggest shifting all the notes over to the right a bit to allow the wavy lines more space; they're awkwardly close to the barlines right now. The chords in m. 21-22 could similarly use a bit more horizontal room.
- How about moving m. 11 beats 3-4 LH into bass clef to avoid the 8vb and ledger lines?
- Something happened with the tuplet in measure 12; the spacing is funny.
- Measure 24 is missing an A in the left hand at the beginning. (Also, that first chord is flipped.)
- Something seems off about that last chord in m. 28. I think it's that the E should be naturaled.
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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2018, 05:26:20 AM »

Nice work! Some comments:
- Composer: shouldn't Koji Kondo be listed too? Added.
- Given all the emptiness in the measures at the beginning I'd suggest shifting all the notes over to the right a bit to allow the wavy lines more space; they're awkwardly close to the barlines right now. The chords in m. 21-22 could similarly use a bit more horizontal room. Fixed.
- How about moving m. 11 beats 3-4 LH into bass clef to avoid the 8vb and ledger lines? That works too.
- Something happened with the tuplet in measure 12; the spacing is funny. Fixed.
- Measure 24 is missing an A in the left hand at the beginning. (Also, that first chord is flipped.) That A already exists in the RH instead. (I did this intentionally.) Fixed the stem direction, though.
- Something seems off about that last chord in m. 28. I think it's that the E should be naturaled. That sounds more like it. Also could be the register.
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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2018, 05:40:40 PM »

Looks good to me!
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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2018, 06:44:42 PM »

Good.
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Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Epilogue" by Olimar12345
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2018, 06:44:50 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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