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Author Topic: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo  (Read 177 times)

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[GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« on: February 11, 2018, 11:46:11 PM »

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Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite!
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Bolero
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo
« Last Edit: February 14, 2018, 03:28:38 PM by Altissimo »
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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2018, 11:48:13 PM »

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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 04:50:40 AM »

Short and sweet. Nice arrangement!

Notes look good. I just have a few things:
- The game title is slightly off alignment.
- The mf is a little high. Go ahead and center it.
- The same voice that has the E in the left hand (that you incorporated) also has a D that shows up various places throughout the song. I believe you left it out because it's too big of a reach since it plays on the same beat as the low G in the left hand. Correct me if I'm wrong. Just thought I'd mention that.

That's all I have for this one.
 
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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2018, 11:50:48 PM »

- The same voice that has the E in the left hand (that you incorporated) also has a D that shows up various places throughout the song. I believe you left it out because it's too big of a reach since it plays on the same beat as the low G in the left hand. Correct me if I'm wrong. Just thought I'd mention that.

Correct. I think I had briefly toyed with the idea of taking it down an octave but decided not to for... reasons. I don't know, this arrangement is like two years old lmao. I think it just negatively affected the texture imo.

Rest is fixed.
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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2018, 12:48:08 AM »

Looks good, but could we put all of the left hand staccatos above the noteheads in places where they're currently not? You could also afford to space out the systems a bit more.
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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2018, 03:28:50 PM »

Better?
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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2018, 05:06:46 PM »

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Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Bolero" by Altissimo
« Reply #7 on: February 14, 2018, 05:06:57 PM »

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