[DELETED] [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes - "Takarabakoya" by Piano Psychopath

Started by Zeta, February 09, 2018, 06:23:22 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Takarabakoya
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Piano Psychopath

Piano Psychopath

J̨̜̰͍̻̲ ̻U̩̻͟ ̹̬͕̥̜̮ͅS͔̙̩̱͎͢ ̲̺͈̟͙̖̦T̺̫̳̞̱̝̠ ̵͉̦̲ ̳̩͓̤̞̜̼͜M̦̣͓̀ ̟̖Ò̦̦͖͔͖̜ ̡̱̲͓̞͔͖Ǹ͎̳̳͍͖̟ ̜̥̭͕̤ͅI̱͉̥ ̭̪K͇͕̺̭͞ ̫̹̘͇͍A̩̪͢

joeberryosponge

The sheet seems fine, but I have some suggestions for you.
  • You should show the syncopation within the beats to make it easier to read. Here is an example from the first measures.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/cg54dvrge06pzy9/Takarabakoya.jpg?dl=0
  • I think the chords in the bass line should lowered or changed when the right hand is in the lower register. The ranges clash and sounds a bit muddy.
  • I think slurs and articulations would help separate the different sections. The original song has different instruments for the melody and it might help

Piano Psychopath

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2l6aha1zn99zvpe/Takarabakoya1.pdf?dl=0

This might be better, though I don't like the sound of the left hand now at the part you told me to fix. I might need to change it a bit more.
J̨̜̰͍̻̲ ̻U̩̻͟ ̹̬͕̥̜̮ͅS͔̙̩̱͎͢ ̲̺͈̟͙̖̦T̺̫̳̞̱̝̠ ̵͉̦̲ ̳̩͓̤̞̜̼͜M̦̣͓̀ ̟̖Ò̦̦͖͔͖̜ ̡̱̲͓̞͔͖Ǹ͎̳̳͍͖̟ ̜̥̭͕̤ͅI̱͉̥ ̭̪K͇͕̺̭͞ ̫̹̘͇͍A̩̪͢

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