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Author Topic: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 144 times)

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[GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« on: December 31, 2017, 12:41:59 AM »

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Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario Kart: Super Circuit
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Snow Land
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64
« Last Edit: January 05, 2018, 12:54:42 PM by WaluigiTime64 »
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #1 on: December 31, 2017, 12:42:30 AM »


Also yes, I did alter inversions for playability.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2017, 12:44:04 AM »

I noticed you're missing the bottom half of your copyright info, Wah. Everything else looks good at a glance!
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #3 on: December 31, 2017, 12:50:16 AM »

I noticed you're missing the bottom half of your copyright info, Wah.
Oops. I knew something was missing. Forgot to credit the site I'm submitting it to lol. Should be fixed now.

Everything else looks good at a glance!
That sounds good. Thank you.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2018, 03:32:22 PM »

Random suggestion: Move bassline down an octave in the B section? It sounds way to high there. I get that you did it so it'd be the same as the A section, but I think it might be better changed.

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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #5 on: January 03, 2018, 05:22:14 PM »

I did a note check. Looks perfect.

I just have three things for ya:
- The composer/arranger are slightly off alignment. Go ahead and right-align those.
- Make the bpm with spaces like this:

- In the copyright, put Nintendo first. I know all our sheets don't have the publisher first, but I've been making all Nintendo sheets at least have the publisher first. Almost all of them are that way now, so let's keep it that way. : )

Also, I agree with Mael's suggestion. Sweet work!
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #6 on: January 03, 2018, 05:29:32 PM »

Copyright info is pretty high up there. Move it down to make it look more like the picture in the formatting guidelines. Once adjusted, you could probably even fit another system on that page.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #7 on: January 03, 2018, 09:10:08 PM »

Random suggestion: Move bassline down an octave in the B section? It sounds way to high there. I get that you did it so it'd be the same as the A section, but I think it might be better changed.
Also, I agree with Mael's suggestion. Sweet work!
Done.

I did a note check. Looks perfect.
Woot!

I just have three things for ya:
- The composer/arranger are slightly off alignment. Go ahead and right-align those.
- Make the bpm with spaces like this:
Fixed.

- In the copyright, put Nintendo first. I know all our sheets don't have the publisher first, but I've been making all Nintendo sheets at least have the publisher first. Almost all of them are that way now, so let's keep it that way. : )
Fixed, and yeah I was basing it off this so I got a little confused. Strange how the order of Publisher, Developer isn't actually on the Formatting Guidelines (unless it is and I'm blind lol).

Copyright info is pretty high up there. Move it down to make it look more like the picture in the formatting guidelines.
Fixed (I think).

Once adjusted, you could probably even fit another system on that page.
I could but I'm not going to, because there will still be a second page, and I've managed to split them evenly into the A and B sections as it is.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #8 on: January 05, 2018, 05:17:15 AM »

This looks very coolsorry There's just a few things I'd fix:

- m8 LH beat 4: should be a B instead of an A
- m16 LH beat 4: should be a G instead of an A
- The D in m25-28 is written an octave lower than the D in m24. However, in the original, both of these are the same pitch. You should move the RH part in m17-24 down an octave to reflect this.
- You should probably consider putting in some kind of harmony part in m17-24 (either the countermelody from the original or just whole notes or something).

This next one is completely optional, but considering it's quite playable and you have layered the bass and harmony together in other sections of the sheet, you should consider adding in some of the missing bass notes; specifically on beats 3-4 of m2, 4, 8, 10, and 12. Like this:
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That's all I got, very nice sheet. Glad to see some more Super Circuit get on site.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #9 on: January 05, 2018, 12:55:24 PM »

Discussed over Discord. The files have been updated.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #10 on: January 05, 2018, 08:13:42 PM »

This one is good to go now.
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Re: [GBA] Mario Kart: Super Circuit - "Snow Land" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #11 on: January 05, 2018, 08:13:48 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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