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Author Topic: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Hateno Village (Day)" by Nacho2420  (Read 313 times)

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Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Hateno Village (Day)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nacho2420
« Last Edit: January 25, 2018, 05:02:30 AM by nacho2420 »
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first thing I notice is that on the last page the bass rhythm sounds to be going top middle top whereas you've written it as bottom middle top.  any reason for that?
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The whole third page or a specific measure?
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starting at like 1:06 in the youtube video which I believe is the start of the third page as well
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I hear both actually, now that you pointed it out. I may add the top octave in later today. But yeah, the bottom notes are in the original; it'll be more present if you use good headphones/speakers

Edit: Added the top octaves in the left hand for the 3rd page
« Last Edit: December 30, 2017, 03:26:56 AM by nacho2420 »
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Very nice work! I like this a lot.

- Small thing: you can put "and" on the second line of the composer info to even it out a bit.
- Though the right hand G is in its own layer between measures 1-2, I would recommend opting to hide the extra rests and flip the main layer's notes and articulations back to their original positions.
- Courtesy accidentals: They're nice to have, but a few I think are unnecessary, like the G in measure 9. On the contrary, it may be worth having one for the B flat later on in that measure, and for the C# at the beginning of measure 45.
- You've got some tie collisions in measure 12. Flip beats 1 and 2 downwards in the right hand. Similar thing in measure 14, flip those beats back downwards and make sure the slur isn't hitting anything.
- I'm not sure I hear the C naturals under the D's in the first half of measure 13...
- In measure 23, the timing of the B-A is too late. It should strike before beat 2.
- The D's between measures 25-26 should be tied.
- Flip the inner ties between measures 37-38.
- I would suggest splitting the layers on beat 4 of measure 40 as you did in measure 36.
- The slurs above the right hand in measures 36-41 right now are misleading as they start in one layer and end in another. To amend this, we can use one slur from the E at the end of 38 to the chord, one above the phrase from 38-40, and one below the notes in m. 40-41. Or something like that; experiment a bit and see what gives the most clarity.
- The voices in the right hand of the last system are difficult to follow. May I suggest something along the lines of this?

« Last Edit: January 14, 2018, 05:26:54 AM by Latios212 »
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All fixed!!
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Sweet, almost there! Just a couple follow-up comments from last time:
- Lower the rest back to its normal height in the first measure.
- A few slurs still confusingly group notes between two voices; I'd suggest splitting them to show the phrases more clearly. Measures 7-8, 36-40.
- The last E of measure 40 in the right hand should be in the lower layer, right?
- Just to double check, have you confirmed that the D naturals in measure 13 are indeed there?
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Fixed the slurs and the rests. For measure 41 with the E, I think it should stay in the 1st layer as it becomes the melody without any counter lines over it so it should be as is.

And yes, I do hear both C's and D's in measure 13.
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- The last E of measure 40 in the right hand should be in the lower layer, right?
This still needs to be fixed. It should be played in both layers at the same time.

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Should I put the following 8th notes at the end of each bar after in two layers as well?
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No, that's not necessary; I just wanted to make it as clear as possible the melody goes D-E-F instead of just D-F.

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Ohh I see what you mean. All fixed!!
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Awesome work with this sheet!

Two things from me and then this one is accepted:
- The slur is slightly clashing with the triplet "3" in M. 4.
- Go ahead and right align the D.C. to the end of the staff...basically make it line up like this:
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