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Author Topic: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo  (Read 246 times)

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[GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« on: December 25, 2017, 03:30:34 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Tip-Top Fair
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo
« Last Edit: May 30, 2018, 02:15:02 PM by Altissimo »
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #1 on: December 25, 2017, 03:30:59 PM »

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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2018, 03:47:56 PM »

bumpin this cause im an asshole
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2018, 05:17:14 AM »

-I would recommend a D.C. instead for obvious reasons, but eh it's your call here.
-Did you write measure 2 (LH) and elsewhere like that for a reason? eighth-quarter-eighth is more concise and common, as well as easier to read imo.
-The first-line E on beat 1 of measure 8 (RH) is being unnecessarily doubled. If there isn't a reason for it, I would suggest it be removed.
-For consistency's sake, remove the second-line G from the triplet in measure 28 (RH). It looks like it was placed there by mistake.
-Maybe make that left margin not so big?

Everything else looks fine. Nice job on this one.

File containing all suggested changes: https://www.dropbox.com/s/brgl47w9zlv1rpy/Tip-Top%20Fair12345.mus?dl=1
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2018, 02:15:29 PM »

i have no particular attachment to anything so your changes are incorporated lol
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2018, 12:07:59 AM »

I approve.
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2018, 06:52:33 PM »

It looks great, and passes my checklist.
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2018, 06:52:36 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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