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Author Topic: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420  (Read 146 times)

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Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Temple of Time
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nacho2420
« Last Edit: December 06, 2017, 07:43:02 AM by nacho2420 »
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Haven't note checked yet, but everything else looks great! I'll finish this one up shortly.
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Notes are good!
Only thing I'd recommend: You could add an expression text along with your metronome marking. Those aren't required on NSM sheets, but it's nice to have those on sheets, especially pianistic pieces like this one.

Great work!
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Notes are good!
Only thing I'd recommend: You could add an expression text along with your metronome marking. Those aren't required on NSM sheets, but it's nice to have those on sheets, especially pianistic pieces like this one.

Agreed! But after 149 sheets, you may find it hard to come up with new material

Great work!

Ditto on this. Great to see you here again, Nacho!
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https://www.allmusic.com/moods

*Frantically bookmarks*

Back before my NSM account, I looked to the Tempo article every time for a marking.
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Just come up with a good word and then google translate it into italian.

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Just come up with a good word and then google translate it into italian.

He's kidding, really don't do this.
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Feedback time:
-Again I'd suggest using 0.5 left margin.
-Measure 1's Gb should be an F# (it's quartal there).
-A little thing about the placement of your dynamics: Try to place them evenly between the two staves when both hands are playing the same dynamic. Sometimes you have them right underneath the top line which looks odd. This is okay to do when only the top staff is playing, but looks funny when both hands are supposed to be the same volume.
-Right now the repeat scheme looks odd. You don't have to include the forward repeat bar if the repeat goes back to the beginning, but since it does go back to the beginning, a D.C. (which literally means to return to the beginning) would be more fitting, methinks.
-Measures 20 and 21 would look much better as rolled chords.

Once again, here's a version that contains these changes. Use it if you desire.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/33iob2brou54ycu/The%20Legend%20of%20Zelda%20Breath%20of%20the%20Wild%20-%20Temple%20of%20Time12345.mus?dl=1
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Thanks Olimar!!! You are bae.

Final files are uploaded and ready to go
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Awesome!
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This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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