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Author Topic: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila  (Read 65 times)

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[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila
« on: November 03, 2017, 07:23:00 AM »

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Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Vs. Meta Knight
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila
« Last Edit: November 06, 2017, 02:00:36 AM by Zeila »
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2017, 07:23:48 AM »

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila
« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2017, 03:25:58 PM »

yass finallyyy
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2017, 05:26:36 AM »

Nice! This seems really very solid, great work. Let's take a look at that intro for now...



- It needs MORE POWER! It's pretty rare to happen upon something of this intensity, so I would recommend at least three (or, even four!) f's here for the opening dynamic.
- Related to the above, the LH absolutely needs more than single notes. I think octaves are present in the original, so you can go ahead and add them in here as you can see in the picture above. I'm not 100% sure about the third left hand attack (the two eighth notes), but I think I have it correct here. See if that sounds okay to you. (Also might want to put that in 8vb.)
- Wow, these clusters of notes are all taken right from the whole tone scale and aren't random fist-slamming as it sounds like! You've transcribed them perfectly, except the second cluster seems to be missing a C (that I wrote in above).
- Make sure the ties don't overlap each other for the third cluster of notes.

Looking ahead, it seems like you're missing a RH chord on beat 2.5 in m. 9-10, similar to what you included in the following couple measures. But that's all I've got time for now.
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Meta Knight" by Zeila
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2017, 08:53:13 PM »

yass finallyyy
^.^ up next is Halberd

Nice! This seems really very solid, great work. Let's take a look at that intro for now...

- It needs MORE POWER! It's pretty rare to happen upon something of this intensity, so I would recommend at least three (or, even four!) f's here for the opening dynamic.
- Related to the above, the LH absolutely needs more than single notes. I think octaves are present in the original, so you can go ahead and add them in here as you can see in the picture above. I'm not 100% sure about the third left hand attack (the two eighth notes), but I think I have it correct here. See if that sounds okay to you. (Also might want to put that in 8vb.)
Thanks!! I decided to go with four f's, and what you wrote sounds good. I added 8vb's too

- Wow, these clusters of notes are all taken right from the whole tone scale and aren't random fist-slamming as it sounds like! You've transcribed them perfectly, except the second cluster seems to be missing a C (that I wrote in above).
- Make sure the ties don't overlap each other for the third cluster of notes.
Oops, done

Looking ahead, it seems like you're missing a RH chord on beat 2.5 in m. 9-10, similar to what you included in the following couple measures. But that's all I've got time for now.
It just sounds like C's, but I added it in anyways

Aside from that, I lowered the LH aside from the staccato'd quarter notes down an octave in m17-22
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