[SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Super Pipe House" (Replacement) by Sebastian

Started by Zeta, October 20, 2017, 02:33:06 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Super Pipe House
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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WaluigiTime64

I like this. This is a nice sheet.

One thing though: For the last measure, could you possibly include that lower B in the flute melody (beat 3)? It's a little more pronounced than the xylophone.
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Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Sebastian

Quote from: WaluigiTime64 on October 20, 2017, 02:43:08 PMOne thing though: For the last measure, could you possibly include that lower B in the flute melody (beat 3)? It's a little more pronounced than the xylophone.
Hmmm, I'll have to check that out. Thanks for the feedback!

Quote from: Latios212 on October 21, 2017, 08:20:26 AMDon't forget to list Koji Kondo as a composer!
Oh, ok. I was using this listing to help with composers/track names.
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LeviR.star

Quote from: Latios212 on October 21, 2017, 01:05:04 PMWell, I think it's pretty clear here who the original composer is ;)

Static and I agree that it should be like this:

Composed by Koji Kondo
Arranged by Yoko Shimomura

Arranged for Piano by Sebastian
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Static

Or "Piano Arrangement by Sebastian"
I think that one is used more, at least I've used it more.

Latios212

Quote from: Static on October 21, 2017, 01:28:52 PMOr "Piano Arrangement by Sebastian"
I think that one is used more, at least I've used it more.
If so, then make sure it's consistent with the rest by using "Composition/Arrangement by"
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Sebastian

I've had other sheets from this game with "Composed by Yoko Shimomura & Koji Kondo." The official soundtrack isn't completely wrong. I'll put "Composed by Yoko Shimomura & Koji Kondo" for this one.



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Olimar12345

-Measure 19 beat 2 RH: the B should be a C natural.
-In measure 27 (all the way to the down beat of 28) there's an F# in the harmony that would be nice to include if you could.
-I'd remove the "!" from the swing 8s at the top of the chart. It's unnecessary and looks silly.

Not bad overall though.
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Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2017, 10:46:26 AM-Measure 19 beat 2 RH: the B should be a C natural.
Nice catch.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2017, 10:46:26 AM-In measure 27 (all the way to the down beat of 28) there's an F# in the harmony that would be nice to include if you could.
Added.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2017, 10:46:26 AM-I'd remove the "!" from the swing 8s at the top of the chart. It's unnecessary and looks silly.
I'd prefer to keep this. I have "Swing e!" in other sheets of mine.

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Olimar12345

Quote from: Sebastian on December 03, 2017, 01:01:41 PMI'd prefer to keep this. I have "Swing e!" in other sheets of mine.

If you're keeping it simply because it is a relic from the shitty finale default swing expression, that doesn't seem like a very good reason.
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