[MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Link's Memories" by Nacho2420

Started by Zeta, September 21, 2017, 08:27:33 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Link's Memories
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nacho2420

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Sebastian

Excellent job! You did wonderfully with this sheet. Notes and formatting are awesome.
Two picky, picky things:
- The first metronome marking is q = 110 and the second is q=104. If you could put spaces in between the second one to match the first, that'd be great. Like this: q = 104.
- The title/subtitle is slightly off alignment. Go ahead and center-align those.

Once again, very good! Excited to see more high-quality work.



Maelstrom

The pedal marks you used are inconsistent and just wrong. Here's what I'd recommend:
I'll be identifying the marks based on the order they occur in the custom shape options
Change system 1 to #11, 2 to #10, and 3 to #26. If you don't get any playback, just put #10 over the system in addition and hide it.

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Maelstrom

First, the top ped. bar can be moved up. Secondly, you used the wrong bar for the 3rd system. I may have said the wrong number, but it should be the same as what you had 2nd system originally.
Also the end of the one on the 2nd system should end on the 2nd system, as that low note is held all the way through that riff thingy.


Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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