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[DELETED] [GB] Yoshi - "BGM 3" by FEZ PEZ
« on: September 14, 2017, 05:33:46 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Yoshi
Console: Game Boy
Title: BGM 3
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: FEZ PEZ
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Re: [GB] Yoshi - "BGM 3" by FEZ PEZ
« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2017, 11:10:58 PM »

Hi, and welcome to NinSheetMusic! First things first, be sure to include a link to the original song when you post your arrangements. I'll gladly do it for you this time, but be sure to do it yourself in the future:

There's quite a bit that needs to be done with your arrangement before it can get on site. Let me offer some suggestions to get started:

- First, your formatting needs to be updated to fit our standards. There's too many things that need to be done for me to list them individually, but you can find all of the formatting guidlines in this thread here. If you use a notation software other than Finale (such as Musescore or Sibelius), you can go to this thread here to ask for help with formatting.
- The composer for this song is Jun'ichi Masuda (yes, that Jun'ichi Masuda)
- The copyright year for this game is 1991, and the publishers are Nintendo and Game Freak
- For the most part, it looks like you've omitted the third voice from the piece. While you obviously shouldn't write anything that's impossible to play, you really should try and include as much of the third voice as you can.
- Have you thought about putting the song in cut time? The song moves fast enough that it might be easier to count if it was in cut time, rather than common time.

If you have any other questions, be sure to ask below, or feel free to shoot me a PM. We're always willing to help!

EDIT: I just realized - are you using the NES version of Yoshi, or the Game Boy version? That'll be somewhat important to this discussion.
« Last Edit: September 14, 2017, 11:13:39 PM by Yug_Guy »
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Re: [GB] Yoshi - "BGM 3" by FEZ PEZ
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2017, 06:58:02 AM »

Archiving this until the above is fixed...
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