[NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars

Started by Zeta, September 03, 2017, 12:40:27 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Final Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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FireArrow

from measures 6 and on I'm not hearing a half note voice and an eight note voice but two voices imitating eachother. Notating it as such would get rid of the clashing beaming as well.
Quote from: Dudeman on January 23, 2017, 05:35:59 PM
straight from the department of redundancy department

Rwars

Quote from: FireArrow on September 03, 2017, 03:32:53 PMfrom measures 6 and on I'm not hearing a half note voice and an eight note voice but two voices imitating eachother. Notating it as such would get rid of the clashing beaming as well.

Right, right, all fixed now.

Latios212

How about moving the top notes in m. 1-3 into the top staff instead to make it clearer that the right hand should play them? Same with the last measure.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Rwars

Moved. I was thinking of moving the entire RH into bass clef, but I figured it would be better to stay treble.

Sebastian

Notes look good.
3 things I have:
- The arranger/composer is slightly mis-aligned. Go ahead and right-align those. Text tool > highlight > Text > Alignment > Right.
- The combination for the composer/arranger information should be either "Arrangement/Composition by" or "Arranged/Composed by." You have "Composed/Arrangement by." Keep them consistent.
- The url should be https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/

Other than that, looks good.



Latios212

Quote from: Rwars on September 18, 2017, 01:03:45 PMMoved. I was thinking of moving the entire RH into bass clef, but I figured it would be better to stay treble.
I actually think bass clef all the way through would be better.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Rwars

Quote from: Sebastian on September 23, 2017, 11:39:56 AM- The url should be https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/

Ah, the one thing I usually have trouble remembering.
But yeah, there we go, everything ever has been fixed. Anything else, I wonder?

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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