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Author Topic: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars  (Read 186 times)

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[NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« on: September 03, 2017, 08:40:27 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Final Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars
« Last Edit: September 24, 2017, 09:23:08 PM by Rwars »
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2017, 08:41:22 PM »

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2017, 11:32:53 PM »

from measures 6 and on I'm not hearing a half note voice and an eight note voice but two voices imitating eachother. Notating it as such would get rid of the clashing beaming as well.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2017, 01:34:07 AM »

from measures 6 and on I'm not hearing a half note voice and an eight note voice but two voices imitating eachother. Notating it as such would get rid of the clashing beaming as well.

Right, right, all fixed now.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2017, 04:14:51 PM »

How about moving the top notes in m. 1-3 into the top staff instead to make it clearer that the right hand should play them? Same with the last measure.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2017, 09:03:45 PM »

Moved. I was thinking of moving the entire RH into bass clef, but I figured it would be better to stay treble.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #6 on: September 23, 2017, 07:39:56 PM »

Notes look good.
3 things I have:
- The arranger/composer is slightly mis-aligned. Go ahead and right-align those. Text tool > highlight > Text > Alignment > Right.
- The combination for the composer/arranger information should be either "Arrangement/Composition by" or "Arranged/Composed by." You have "Composed/Arrangement by." Keep them consistent.
- The url should be https://www.NinSheetMusic.org/

Other than that, looks good.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #7 on: September 23, 2017, 08:02:30 PM »

Moved. I was thinking of moving the entire RH into bass clef, but I figured it would be better to stay treble.
I actually think bass clef all the way through would be better.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #8 on: September 24, 2017, 09:10:30 PM »

- The url should be https://www.NinSheetMusic.org/

Ah, the one thing I usually have trouble remembering.
But yeah, there we go, everything ever has been fixed. Anything else, I wonder?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #9 on: September 24, 2017, 09:24:50 PM »

We good now!
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Final Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #10 on: September 24, 2017, 09:25:01 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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