[Wii] Super Smash Bros. Brawl - "Trophy Gallery" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. Brawl
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Trophy Gallery
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Yug_Guy]

Oh hey, it's a challenge replacement this time.

[Yug_Guy]

Bump

[Yug_Guy]

Bump.

Also worth noting that a while back me and Lat went over a couple changes to this arrangement. I've updated the files to include those changes - hopefully it should be a bit better now.

[Olimar12345]

It's solid. Here's the things we chatted about.

Spoiler

[12:37 PM] Olimar12345: The entire LH is good
[12:38 PM] Olimar12345: Would recommend a D.C. though
[12:38 PM] Yug Guy: In addition to the repeat sign?
[12:40 PM] Olimar12345: in lieu of(edited)
[12:40 PM] Yug Guy: Gotcha
[12:41 PM] Olimar12345: as a performer, when I see a D.S. or a backwards repeat bar and I can't remember where the forward repeat bar or sign is, I have a mini heartattack
[12:41 PM] Olimar12345: and D.C. literally means to return to the beginning, so seeing that helps
[12:46 PM] Olimar12345: coutesy B natural in 35 RH would be nice
[12:48 PM] Yug Guy: Done
[12:49 PM] Olimar12345: I'd recommend moving the eighth notes in the second layer RH 35 down an octave
[12:49 PM] Olimar12345: that would also make the next measure easier to start
[12:50 PM] Olimar12345: RH 36: the two D's in the 16th note in the first two beats should be C's
[12:50 PM] Olimar12345: they mirror the previous measure
[12:50 PM] Olimar12345: The B natural on the end of the third beat of that same measure should be a Cb
[12:51 PM] Olimar12345: since the harmony of that bar goes Cmaj7 to Db7
[12:51 PM] Olimar12345: same changes should be made in 38
[12:52 PM] Olimar12345: I'd recommend moving the eighth notes in the second layer RH 39 down an octave too
[12:52 PM] Olimar12345: it would sound more accurate and be easier to play the following measure
[12:53 PM] Yug Guy: Everything you've listed so far has been changed
[12:53 PM] Olimar12345: measure 40 needs the same changes too
[12:53 PM] Olimar12345: if you haven't made them already
[12:53 PM] Yug Guy: I have not
[12:54 PM] Yug Guy: Now I have
[1:01 PM] Olimar12345: everything else looks solid.
[1:01 PM] Olimar12345: some of the RH reaches are really hard though
[1:01 PM] Yug Guy: Anything suggestions to help alleviate that?
[1:02 PM] Olimar12345: less notes when you have melody on top of big chords, really
[1:03 PM] Olimar12345: measures 17-18 hurt because there are also grace notes
[1:03 PM] Olimar12345: 48 I'd move the B on beat three up an octave
[1:03 PM] Olimar12345: and again at 56
[1:04 PM] Yug Guy: I was just about to ask about those measures
[1:06 PM] Yug Guy: Actually, it sounds better without the B's, so I just deleted them
[1:06 PM] Olimar12345: that would do the trick too lol
[1:07 PM] Yug Guy: yeah lol
[1:08 PM] Yug Guy: Gimme a couple minutes & I'll fiddle around with the chords a bit
[1:09 PM] Olimar12345: Also, I'd do this on all of the flute scale stuff
[1:09 PM] Olimar12345: [Image of slur marks]
[1:09 PM] Olimar12345: They're slurring it all
[1:10 PM] Yug Guy: Will do

[close]

Replace the files and we're good here.

[Yug_Guy]

Replace the files and we're good here.

Done

[Sebastian]

Just a couple things and then it's good to go:
- Courtesy accidental on the C in M. 9 (RH).
- Courtesy accidental on the E in M. 37 & 38 (RH; beat 1).

[Yug_Guy]

Just a couple things and then it's good to go:
- Courtesy accidental on the C in M. 9 (RH).
- Courtesy accidental on the E in M. 37 & 38 (RH; beat 1).

Fixed

[Sebastian]

Excellent.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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