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Author Topic: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle Theme" by Rwars  (Read 281 times)

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[NES] Sweet Home - "Battle Theme" by Rwars
« on: September 02, 2017, 06:14:27 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Battle Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars
« Last Edit: November 20, 2017, 02:49:29 PM by Rwars »
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2017, 06:17:08 PM »

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2017, 06:37:24 PM »

A few quick things: Place the treble clef after the barline, because it's disorientating where it is right now
Also, m5-end RH really should be separated into 2 layers for the whole thing. It's two distinct voices, and they don't always follow the same rhythm

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2017, 06:50:47 PM »

A few quick things: Place the treble clef after the barline, because it's disorientating where it is right now
Also, m5-end RH really should be separated into 2 layers for the whole thing. It's two distinct voices, and they don't always follow the same rhythm

Alright, I got the splitting RH done, but the question is, how do I move the clef to the other side?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2017, 07:00:42 PM »

Click on the measure like you would normally do change the clef. In the bottom left corner, there's a box to check to place it after the barline

edit: you'll need to click on the measure with something to make it respace itself
« Last Edit: September 02, 2017, 07:03:00 PM by Maelstrom »
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2017, 07:14:48 PM »

All done. Also added a couple of courtesy accidentals as well.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2017, 07:57:44 PM »

That LH part in general is very demanding to be used like that throughout the piece. I would recommend simplifying it for the sake of the pianist.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2017, 08:20:49 PM »

That LH part in general is very demanding to be used like that throughout the piece. I would recommend simplifying it for the sake of the pianist.

Hmm.. How should I simplify it, do you think? Maybe removing every other 16th note and change it to a series of 8th notes?
« Last Edit: September 02, 2017, 08:26:39 PM by Rwars »
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #8 on: September 02, 2017, 08:23:52 PM »

Sounds great

edit: idk how, but your DC broke

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #9 on: September 02, 2017, 09:45:41 PM »

The DC is now fixed.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #10 on: September 27, 2017, 03:45:17 AM »

That LH part in general is very demanding to be used like that throughout the piece. I would recommend simplifying it for the sake of the pianist.
This still should be done

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2017, 05:07:50 PM »

Simplified the LH now; instead of it being constant 16ths, it now has 8th notes for beats 2 and 4.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2017, 09:29:18 PM »

That doesn't fix the whole problem. There's still repeated 16ths at a high tempo, and removing half doesn't make the ones that remain playable. Fix that, and it should be a lot more playable.

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #13 on: November 08, 2017, 05:53:39 PM »

Do you mind giving me a bit of an suggestion on how I could simplify the song further? Could turning the entire LH into 8th notes work?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Battle" by Rwars
« Reply #14 on: November 08, 2017, 05:56:13 PM »

This is unrelated, but could you please explain why your submission is titled, "Battle", while the sheet itself is titled, "Battle Theme"? I think the initial would be simpler.

EDIT: I'm sorry, this is a really tricky song to play. Don't worry, Rwars; I've had my fair share as well.

While we wait for Mael or another updater to respond --

- perhaps you could shrink the page size to fit all measures on one page?
- those 16th systems in the LH; change it to a 16th (up) - 16th - 8th - 8th note pattern. It will easier on the fingers at this tempo, even if it is rhythmically inaccurate
- while I'm not completely sure on this, I would try removing the bottom note of each RH dyad in m1-4
« Last Edit: November 08, 2017, 06:08:50 PM by LeviR.star »
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