[3DS] Mario & Luigi: Dream Team - "Dreamy Mushrise Winds" by E. Gadd Industries & ThatHiddenCharacte

Started by Zeta, September 02, 2017, 08:40:49 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Dream Team
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Dreamy Mushrise Winds
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: E. Gadd Industries & ThatHiddenCharacter

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I kinda forgot about the existence of this sheet. Oops. Here it is, though! S/o to ThatHiddenCharacter for agreeing to do this with me!
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Maelstrom

I am pleasantly surprised by how good this is. M&L songs can be a bit  tricky sometimes.
Anyway, before notes, I have a few things:
pg2 has wayyy to much white space at the bottom. Either fit in another system or move the ones you have apart enough to fill in the gap.
Secondly, let's talk about note length. Pedal doesn't give you a free pass to make notes shorter than they should be. Take m1, for example. The LH is held for much longer than a quarter, but you only have a quarter written. Go through the whole piece, rechecking the bassline to make sure the lengths are consistent with the original.

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Latios212

Wow, this is nice!

Measures 42-43 are a bit demanding, I would eliminate the lower note in each of the dyads from m. 42 beat 3 to m. 43 beat 1 to eliminate the large intervals.

M. 16 also has some wrongly flipped LH notes.
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LeviR.star

This is a bit nitpicky, but does the tempo have to be specific enough to be 148 instead of 150 bpm?
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ThatHiddenCharacter

Quote from: LeviR.star on September 02, 2017, 02:46:54 PMThis is a bit nitpicky, but does the tempo have to be specific enough to be 148 instead of 150 bpm?
There's a huge difference between 148 BPM and 150 BPM. And that difference is 2 BPM. The difference may be unnoticeable to the human brain, but it's enough that it is necessary to have it.
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mastersuperfan

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

LeviR.star

I don't know about you guys, but here I've been told to round up if it's that close. Doesn't really matter, though, so go ahead and do whatever.
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E. Gadd Industries

I'll add it with the next round of changes, since I'll be away from my PC for a while.
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Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on September 02, 2017, 05:24:04 PMI'll add it with the next round of changes, since I'll be away from my PC for a while.
I wouldn't change it. Again, the difference isn't perceivably noticeable, but it's still there. I say stick with 148.
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mastersuperfan

There's absolutely no reason to round from an even number to another even number. Leave it as is.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

LeviR.star

Quote from: mastersuperfan on September 02, 2017, 06:46:52 PMThere's absolutely no reason to round from an even number to another even number. Leave it as is.

I doubt the composer had any reason to make the tempo that specific. I'd recommend re-counting the BPM from the original source via Tempo Tapper.
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ThatHiddenCharacter

Quote from: LeviR.star on September 02, 2017, 06:55:45 PMI doubt the composer had any reason to make the tempo that specific. I'd recommend re-counting the BPM from the original source via Tempo Tapper.
That's what we did. But we were off by one. The tempo should be 147 BPM. I just tested it again.
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