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Author Topic: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star  (Read 259 times)

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[SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« on: September 02, 2017, 03:22:04 PM »

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Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Avalanche
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star
« Last Edit: October 01, 2017, 08:31:01 PM by LeviR.star »
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2017, 03:23:47 PM »


This may be my second least-favorite Kirby game, (mostly because it's hardly a Kirby game at all...) but I sure love how the title screen theme sounds on piano!
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2017, 02:44:22 AM »

Just had a thought: should I add developer names Banpresto and Compile to the Copyright information at the bottom?
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #4 on: September 16, 2017, 11:39:50 PM »

Forgot to do that. Files updated with the proper developers enclosed. Wonder how often we've forgotten to do that on other sheets...
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #5 on: September 27, 2017, 03:38:02 AM »

m2 - RH slur should start on the last note in the measure, and not before.
also RH m2 - 8va should extend until the 2nd to last note, and the LH should extend one more note
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #6 on: September 27, 2017, 07:10:38 PM »

m2 - RH slur should start on the last note in the measure, and not before.
also RH m2 - 8va should extend until the 2nd to last note, and the LH should extend one more note

Thanks as always for the feedback! Files are updated; I deleted the LH slur in m2 as well.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #7 on: September 27, 2017, 09:52:34 PM »

Great sheet! One thing I notice is that the copyright information is incorrect in its order. You have "Developer, Publisher." It should be "Publisher, Developer, etc."
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #8 on: September 27, 2017, 10:03:10 PM »

So, "Nintendo, HAL Laboratory, Compile, Banpresto"? I must have made similar mistakes in dozens of my sheets...
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #9 on: September 27, 2017, 11:16:53 PM »

Correct.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #10 on: September 27, 2017, 11:35:58 PM »

Thanks, Seb! Changes are made.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2017, 03:35:56 AM »

Neat sheet! Almost there:

- Inconsistent beaming in measure 1. Make the LH match the RH by beaming them together.
- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.
- The sharp signs on the top F's in the RH of measure 9 shouldn't be there.
- Last measure - to keep the intervals consistent in the RH as the chord ascends, I would respell the D as a Cx.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #12 on: September 28, 2017, 03:49:29 AM »

- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.

Could you please talk to Mael about that? I think he had me change some of those octaves so that it would be easier to play.

I have an updated .musx; I'll change the files once you can talk that over with Mael. Oh, and thanks for the feedback. ;)
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #13 on: September 28, 2017, 06:07:14 AM »

That's an A# minor chord in measure 8, don't spell it with a Bb.
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Re: [SNES] Kirby's Avalanche - "Title Screen" by LeviR.star
« Reply #14 on: October 01, 2017, 08:31:34 PM »

- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.

That's an A# minor chord in measure 8, don't spell it with a Bb.

Fixed! Thanks, guys!
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