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Author Topic: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane  (Read 209 times)

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[GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« on: August 21, 2017, 02:49:32 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Wario Land II
Console: Game Boy
Title: The Underground Train
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Tbane
« Last Edit: August 27, 2017, 02:43:57 PM by Tbane »
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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2017, 02:52:02 PM »

Hello everyone!
This is a transcription of one of my alltime favourite game!  :)

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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2017, 06:47:09 PM »

I love me some Wario Land.
Anyway, 2 quick things:
1: the PDF must be made from the .mus file, which means the .mus file must be formatted accurately.
2: Voice doubling - those octaves in the first system only serve to confuse the melody. Also, each the voice is picked up by the RH, you should still include it in the LH and put parenthesis around the RH note. As it is, it's a pain to follow the melody. If you just put rests in the RH, it would seem rather strange. So, this is your best option here.

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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #3 on: August 22, 2017, 11:05:40 AM »

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1: the PDF must be made from the .mus file, which means the .mus file must be formatted accurately.
I have now formatted the .mus filed and made it into a .pdf file

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2: Voice doubling - those octaves in the first system only serve to confuse the melody. Also, each the voice is picked up by the RH, you should still include it in the LH and put parenthesis around the RH note. As it is, it's a pain to follow the melody. If you just put rests in the RH, it would seem rather strange. So, this is your best option here.
Could you please specify which measures it goes about?

Thank you for the feedback!

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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2017, 12:39:19 PM »

Oké so i made some changes to the first system of the sheet.
Is this the way to do this with the parentheses thing or should i be doing this different?
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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2017, 10:58:53 PM »

Here's your most recent file with acceptable formatting (plus a few other aesthetic cleans):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ax38m9v6a3esgzo/Wario%20Land%202%20-%20The%20Underground%20Train.mus?dl=0
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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2017, 02:46:42 PM »

Wow, thanks alot for those changes!  ;D
It sounds much better now.
I've replaced the old files with the new ones.
Are there anymore things that need to change to the sheet before it can be accepted?
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Re: [GB] Wario Land II - "The Underground Train" by Tbane
« Reply #7 on: November 06, 2017, 05:01:45 AM »

This sheet is coming along but there's a lot to be done:

- The melody in the RH is still inconsistent with the original: Even when certain notes are doubled in a piano arrangement, you must always notate the full melody so the reader knows what the melody is. Any notes that are doubled should be parenthesized in the accompaniment part in this case.
Here's what I mean (using m5 as an example):
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- In addition to this, there are some accidental mistakes:
Accidental Errors
LH m5 beat 4.5: An should be Bbb.
RH m9 beat 4: An and Dn should be Bbb and Ebb.
LH m9 beat 3-4: Dn should be Ebb and En should be Fb.
LH m13 beat 4.5: An should be Bbb.
LH m18 beat 4.5: Bn should be Cb.
LH m19 beat 1: An should be Bbb.
RH m19: Any Ans and Bns should be Bbbs and Cbs, respectively.
m23: Any Ans should be Bbbs.
LH m25 beat 1: An should be Bbb.
LH m26 beat 1: Bn should be Cb.
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