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Author Topic: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin  (Read 364 times)

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[MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin
« on: August 08, 2017, 11:45:42 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yooka-Laylee
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Moodymaze Marsh
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Evan Lin
« Last Edit: September 23, 2017, 09:25:45 PM by Sebastian »
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2017, 11:50:15 PM »

The music here is sheet music from Yooka-Laylee. More specifically, World 3 - Moodymaze Marsh, composed by Grant Kirkhope.

Preview of my sheet music arrangement on my YouTube channel:

YouTube link to the real song:
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2017, 06:52:40 AM »

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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2017, 10:05:05 AM »

First thing, you should check the formatting guidelines. The copyright informations are missing.

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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #4 on: August 22, 2017, 06:13:04 PM »

I'll definitely get some feedback for this one soon.
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2017, 08:29:08 AM »

After the feedback comes in, I can definitely add the formatting stuff in it as well
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2017, 07:41:56 PM »

Guess what this is?
A formatting post!
Aside from the guidelines, there are a few more things that desperately need attention.

- Grace notes must be slurred to the nearest note
- Why not use a simile for the LH marks? Also, maybe put a bracket around those 8ths so it's even clearer what it's referring to
- Double barlines for key changes
- Resize everything to 85-90% and/or change the notehead font to maestro. That'll let you fit more measures per system and it won't look like it's spread quite so thin
- Speaking of spacing, the space between systems is really inconsistant. More systems could be on pg3, and there's too much space between the systems.
- Also, one measure systems are strongly discouraged. If you end up with one at the end, move the end bar line up so the system doesn't go over the whole page

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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #7 on: September 05, 2017, 09:48:28 PM »

Evan and I have been making edits to this one. We're not quite done yet, but will hopefully finish soon.
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evanpianomaster
« Reply #8 on: September 18, 2017, 08:08:18 PM »

Just so you guys don't think this submission is dead, we've made changes to this sheet and I sent the final copy to Evan. Currently waiting on his response...
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin
« Reply #9 on: September 23, 2017, 03:20:37 AM »

Evan and I made some fixes and edited those changes into the OP.
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin
« Reply #10 on: September 23, 2017, 09:01:59 PM »

Neat. Just a few small things I'm noticing as I listen along:

- Get rid of the ties in m. 10 and 12. Those are separate notes.
- Could we implement the bass striking on beats 2.5 and 4.5 in m. 10-13?
- Some staccatos on the LH part in m. 14-17 could be nice. Not totally necessary, but for clarity.
- The RH staccatos are a bit high in 18 and 20. Delete the staccatos, and either deselect the note's box using the stem direction tool or delete and re-enter the notes before re-entering the staccatos.

Other than that, looks nice!
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin
« Reply #11 on: September 23, 2017, 09:26:26 PM »

Excellent work, everyone.
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Re: [MUL] Yooka-Laylee - "Moodymaze Marsh" by Evan Lin
« Reply #12 on: September 23, 2017, 09:26:30 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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