[NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: East Garden
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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[Olimar12345]

All double flats should be regular flats. Also, the URL should look like this: http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/ with the capital letters.

[Sebastian]

Nice work!

A few things I noticed:
- The playability of the arrangement is one of my concerns. You could arrange the first two measures this way:


The line indicates that the left hand should play the notes in layer two after the C is played. The C can be held for the whole duration with the use of the pedal (which can be indicated with a pedal marking if you wish). You can create the line using the Smart Shape Tool.
- The entire left hand once again is in the third layer. Go ahead and transfer that to layer 1.
- Put a courtesy accidental on the first D in the second layer of M. 3 & 5.
- Go ahead and respace all the measures. The easiest way is just by clicking a note in each measure and it will automatically respace that measure.
- All the Gbs in M. 9 should be F#s.

The first layer in M. 3 onward is missing some bass notes, but I assume you left it a whole note for playability reasons.

[Olimar12345]

Seb, I wouldn't recommend using the line like that, as it can be mistaken for a glissando. I'd recommend shortening it to begin somewhere near the end of the measure or use some other indication to switch hands (like simply putting "l.h.").

[Latios212]

Cross-staving the last note in m. 7 is fine because that'd be a large jump for the RH, but I feel like the last notes of m. 3, 4, 5, and 6 are probably more easily reachable by the right hand to avoid the left thumb having to play two notes in a row.

[Olimar12345]

Check this out:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/aws6n1z3i385998/eastgarden12345.mus?dl=0

This is what I did:
-Moved the LH to layer 1 (using 3 is unnecessary)
-Adjusted the formatting slightly.
-Changed the D.C. Al Fine to a regular D.C. adding the note to only jump on the second time through the piece.
-Edited the second measure to the way I mentioned in my previous post.
-Added the courtesy naturals that Seb mentioned.
-Changed the Gb's in measure 9 to F#'s. The harmony there is D7 (D F# A C) and F# is the third note in that, not Gb.

[Sebastian]

Rwars has made the fixes. Excellent work once again!
And thanks MSF, Lat, and Olimar for your input with this sheet.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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