[3DS] Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon - "Gloomy Manor" by E. Gadd Industries & Retropardies

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Gloomy Manor
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: E. Gadd Industries & Retropardies

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[E. Gadd Industries]

Finally got the accidentals (hopefully) ironed out with some outside help!
This is the last of the 3 collab pieces with Retropardies!

[E. Gadd Industries]

Seb and I looked over this and I updated with the resulting files

[LeviR.star]

This is just me, but what I would do is take the last 6 measures and put the RH in a bass clef so the octave dyads can be more controlled dynamically with both hands. But again, just me.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Updated with the fix Levi suggested

[Sebastian]

Good call, Levi. I like that idea.

[LeviR.star]

Thanks! I'm always happy to help.

[E. Gadd Industries]

*bump*

[Maelstrom]

Looks great!
m20 b3 RH - C should be a C#
m9 LH - I don't think that courtesy accidental is needed at all

Aaaaand that's it

[E. Gadd Industries]

Thanks you! Files have updated!

[Latios212]

- Staccato is on wrong side of m. 8, 16 beat 1. Would also consider hiding those quarter rests.
- I'm on my phone right now so I can't check the original, but just want to make sure that the pickup to m. 4 really is different than the grace notes into m. 12.

[E. Gadd Industries]

http://imgur.com/a/BbYYj

Before I make any changes, this is what the original looked like, with reference to the m12 comment. That's what I thought sounded most accurate, but then Seb went over it with me and changed it to present, probz for the better: more easily readable for the pianist.
So what do I need to do, keep it as is or change it back to that, or...?

[Maelstrom]

We talked, and 12 is fine as it is

[E. Gadd Industries]

I updated the files with the staccato shtuffs. And the quarter rest shtuff

[Maelstrom]

Nice.

Accepted