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Author Topic: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore  (Read 124 times)

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[NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« on: July 16, 2017, 10:44:44 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yoshi's Cookie
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: 1P Music Type C
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jacopo Tore
« Last Edit: July 22, 2017, 02:36:09 PM by JacopoTore »
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2017, 10:45:46 PM »

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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2017, 11:00:06 PM »

Hey, Jacob, this is looking pretty good! Love to see some obscure Nintendo games get some love on this site. ;)

What I would suggest is that you look over your counting. You can use this chart to help you:

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Also, I'm not an expert on copyright, but you should include Nintendo with "Blue Planet Software", and don't forget capitals!

One last thing: you don't have to start a new line for each composer. If you want, you can extend them over about 2-3 lines instead. Just make sure they don't reach too close to the middle!

Feel free to ask questions!
« Last Edit: July 16, 2017, 11:03:04 PM by LeviR.star »
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2017, 03:17:13 AM »

Jacob??
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2017, 03:20:19 AM »

this is cultural erasure and i wont stand for it
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2017, 11:31:42 PM »

Bump
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #6 on: July 22, 2017, 12:13:45 AM »

Jacob, for now, don't worry about bumping. Everyone just submitted their arrangements, and it will take the updaters a long time to get through all of them. You're lucky you got any feedback at all this early.

- move the copyright info down a little, and include a comma between Nintendo and Blue Planet Software
- make sure to include an "and" before the last composer
- in the last measure, change the two eighth rests to a quarter rest

Give it a rest. They'll get to you eventually, but to me, it looks pretty good right now. If a month has passed without feedback here, and plenty of other submissions have been accepted, and it looks like an update may be nigh, I'd say it's ok to bump.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #7 on: July 22, 2017, 02:35:30 PM »

Ok thank you for your explanation, I just replace the score.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #8 on: July 22, 2017, 07:52:49 PM »

For fucks sake stop with "jacob"
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