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Author Topic: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore  (Read 476 times)

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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #15 on: July 31, 2017, 02:43:08 PM »

What is Treble? If you can translate in Italian I thank you, you did with my name I think it isn't a problem for you
Looking around the Italian Wikipedia page, the treble clef is the violino clef, being used with the chiave di sol (English - G clef) on the second line. Either way, it's the top staff on the piano.

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also in the Italian Wikipedia  page https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoshi%27s_Cookie I see Blue Planet Software, are you sure that it isn't correct?
Blue Planet Software was apparently founded as Bullet-Proof Software, so they're the same company. The English Wikipedia page for Yoshi's Cookie has Bullet-Proof as the developer. I'm not sure what the NSM policy is about companies that change names, so you should wait until an updater comes by to clear things up. Other than that, the publication information looks pretty good.

I also have a couple miscellaneous suggestions -
 - I also agree with Levi about removing the 8va marking. It sounds a bit too high with it.
 - It may just be me, but I hear the harmony in m2, 4 as two separate voices. I'd suggest splitting these measures into two voices.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #16 on: July 31, 2017, 04:52:02 PM »

Looking around the Italian Wikipedia page, the treble clef is the violino clef, being used with the chiave di sol (English - G clef) on the second line. Either way, it's the top staff on the piano.
Blue Planet Software was apparently founded as Bullet-Proof Software, so they're the same company. The English Wikipedia page for Yoshi's Cookie has Bullet-Proof as the developer. I'm not sure what the NSM policy is about companies that change names, so you should wait until an updater comes by to clear things up. Other than that, the publication information looks pretty good.

I also have a couple miscellaneous suggestions -
 - I also agree with Levi about removing the 8va marking. It sounds a bit too high with it.
 - It may just be me, but I hear the harmony in m2, 4 as two separate voices. I'd suggest splitting these measures into two voices.
Here's measure 2 -
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #17 on: July 31, 2017, 08:33:03 PM »

I'm not sure what the NSM policy is about companies that change names, so you should wait until an updater comes by to clear things up.

Prolly the name that was used when the game came out.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #18 on: August 05, 2017, 03:52:28 AM »

Prolly the name that was used when the game came out.
yes - whatever the game credits.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2017, 12:08:34 AM »

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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« Reply #20 on: August 12, 2017, 12:23:32 AM »

Jacob, for now, don't worry about bumping. Everyone just submitted their arrangements, and it will take the updaters a long time to get through all of them. You're lucky you got any feedback at all this early.

Give it a rest. They'll get to you eventually, but to me, it looks pretty good right now. If a month has passed without feedback here, and plenty of other submissions have been accepted, and it looks like an update may be nigh, I'd say it's ok to bump.

Look, Jacob, the updaters haven't even gotten to most of the arrangers in submissions yet. Trust me; you'll get your chance.

Let's solve the copyright problem:



Make it look like this; it'll look much better.

Fix that, and I think you'll be good, unless you want those slurs and staccatos I suggested.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #21 on: August 12, 2017, 01:13:44 AM »

STOP CALLING HIM JACOB
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2017, 01:50:27 AM »

It's called a nickname, Mael. I figured that if anyone should be here in this topic, they'd actually be trying to help. If none of you are going to give this guy some actual feedback, then there's no point in being here.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #23 on: August 12, 2017, 02:25:49 AM »

It's because it's not "Jacob" it's "Jacopo" and it's really not hard to just say "Jacopo" so there really isn't a reason to be calling him "Jacob".
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #24 on: August 12, 2017, 07:57:11 AM »

Have a cookie.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2017, 03:33:01 PM »

Whooooaaaa, BEN. WE'VE MISSED YOU.

In all seriousness, Jacob Jacopo, if Ben's revision is chill with you, consider this sheet accepted.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #26 on: August 12, 2017, 04:03:36 PM »

Wow, that's awesome, Ben! I think this revision should be the last one needed.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Bespinben & Jacopo Tore
« Reply #27 on: August 12, 2017, 05:11:40 PM »

@Jacopo: Ben wasn't expecting you to put his name in there. You can just leave yours there alone. Our job as Updaters is to help with sheets and we don't expect our names to be edited in.
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Bespinben & Jacopo Tore
« Reply #28 on: August 12, 2017, 05:58:55 PM »

Ok I understand it, thanks for your explanation!
Is a problem for you, Ben, if I put your name to?
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Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #29 on: August 14, 2017, 12:28:33 AM »

@Jacopo: Ben wasn't expecting you to put his name in there. You can just leave yours there alone. Our job as Updaters is to help with sheets and we don't expect our names to be edited in.

Submission fixed (without Ben's name). We ready to go now.
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