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Author Topic: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657  (Read 283 times)

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Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem Fates
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Lost in Thoughts All Alone
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: D3ath3657
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Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2017, 02:22:02 AM »

Here's the original.

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Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657
« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2018, 08:49:05 PM »

Hey there, D3ath. Sorry for the wait on this. From what I understand there is another arrangement of this track floating around the forums and the updaters/arrangers involved with that version were debating which one to upload (yours or theirs). I'm not totally sure of the status of that to be honest, but if you would like to submit something else in the mean time, feel free to.

Hopefully someone who knows more about this than I do can post and clear things up.
« Last Edit: February 07, 2018, 04:51:48 PM by Olimar12345 »
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Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2018, 06:28:53 AM »

While this is by no means a bad arrangement, I do spot a number of things in this sheet I take issue with...

- Unnecessarily large bars. They make it harder to find strong beats when reading, and the percussion that comes in at about 2:20 is indicative of phrases consisting of three beats.
- Single note arpeggios. I do not feel like they capture the essence of the accompaniment during the chorus for several reasons - you lose of key rhythms and contours from the original, not to mention the original's accompaniment consists of different notes.
- Harmonies. They move around between registers and pop in and out too much; particularly during the chorus in measure 30 where they drop out entirely. The first chord strike of measure 23 sounds relatively empty with an octave in the left hand and sixth in the right, while the following chord strike sounds much heavier with a seventh chord played by the left hand.
- Low notes. Related to the above, the bottom notes of the piece seem to let up occasionally like at the beginning of measure 24 where the lowest note in the chord is just the F# below middle C. The chords before and after it strike A# and D# that are far below that note, sort of leaving the listener wondering where the accompaniment went there.

With regards to the above points I feel that a piano condensing (not posted yet) of the vocal+piano sheet Maelstrom and I have arranged does a better job of maintaining the essence of the original, as well as looks nicer.
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Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657
« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2018, 04:32:08 AM »

I originally chose to go with 6/4 time because the melody was so long, and this divided it into two sections of 4 measures, which is pretty standard, as opposed to two sections of 8 measures. A friend who was studying music with me in college, and helped me out a lot with this arrangement, also said it sounded like 6/4 to him, though he didn't like the temporary change to 9/4 (which I don't like much either), and suggested I could make the whole thing 3/4, which I held off on doing until now, but definitely agree with. Moreover, I am considering changing the intro to 2/4 time, as my friend also suggested.

The reason I went with arpeggios in measures 30-36 is that the actual piano part is constantly in the same register as the voice (in retrospect, I might switch to a hybrid texture for this stretch), and later in the piece, it's because arpeggios on a piano sound more full than repeated block chords, which I found preferable for the instrumental passage from measures 64-71 and the denser texture of subsequent choruses.

Regarding the harmonies moving register, I have played this arrangement on multiple different straight and grand pianos, and have never noticed any problems, especially the impression of missing bass notes. I feel this might be a problem with the MIDI simulation and not the arrangement itself. I even asked my professor for advice, particularly with inconsistent texture, and he did not find anything problematic.

Concerning the chord structures of measure 23 specifically, I also found the A major chord sounded somewhat empty, so I added a C# in the middle register, and moved the E# of the following A#m7 chord up an octave, which makes the texture more even (I haven't updated the files yet).

Concerning measure 24, I do not, in all honesty, find the lack of a lower F# jarring in any way. On the contrary, I find a more mobile bass adds variety and creates interest, and is much more idiomatic to the piano, as opposed to the "licks" performed by the bass in the original, or trying to play all the notes of a piece for ensemble in their original registers.

I realize this arrangement is much more of an actual arrangement, rather than a transcription for piano, but I don't see why this would be problematic.
« Last Edit: February 17, 2018, 04:34:01 AM by D3ath3657 »
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Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Lost in Thoughts All Alone" by D3ath3657
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2018, 05:06:26 AM »

I realize this arrangement is much more of an actual arrangement, rather than a transcription for piano, but I don't see why this would be problematic.
There's nothing wrong with that. The things I listed above were my concerns about how well your interpretation "works" for piano, not how "accurate" it is.

I'll have more to say at some point later; I will have quite a busy week coming up (and am eagerly awaiting your new edits!)
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