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Author Topic: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Clover Elementary" by Altissimo  (Read 84 times)

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Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Clover Elementary
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo
« Last Edit: August 06, 2017, 03:51:25 AM by Altissimo »
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Clover Elementary" by Altissimo
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2017, 05:12:24 AM »

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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Clover Elementary" by Altissimo
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2017, 09:23:57 AM »

Nice job! A few things:

- m1-4 you could consider putting the C and B (then D and C#) notes in the RH staff like so

Regardless i think you should edit m4 somehow
- m6 4th eighth note doesn't sound staccato'd
- m7 & 8 I think the F & E whole notes should be a half notes, and you could put the A in the second layer to distinguish between the two voices
- m17 You're missing a D#, B, and D# below the first three notes, but idk if that was intentional or not
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Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Clover Elementary" by Altissimo
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2017, 03:52:23 AM »

Edited. I wasn't sure to what degree you meant to edit m4 so I just did the addition of the upper voices like you had suggested.
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