[GB] Kirby's Block Ball - "Mr. Shine & Mr. Bright's Stage" (Replacement) by LeviR.star

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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Block Ball
Console: Game Boy
Title: Mr. Shine & Mr. Bright's Stage
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[LeviR.star]

Hey, my first replacement submission! Only took me about 11 months to work up the confidence...

This sheet should be called "Mr. Shine & Mr. Bright's (or Brights'?) Stage"

This is also the first game I've submitted a sheet to twice.

Fun Fact: Around November 26th of 2016 I worked on a replacement sheet for this song, but this is a replacement of a replacement. This is it: Original Mr. Shine & Mr. Bright's Stage.musx] (Turned into a .musx file for an easier download.)

Things Wrong With the Original

- print is a little too small
- no articulations to be found
- tempo is 20 bpm faster than it needs to be
- so many wrong notes it's embarrassing
- missing harmonies
- incorrect rhythms that make me wonder how Requiem came up with some of this stuff
- nearly the entire second half isn't even part of the original song. If anything, this sheet should have stayed off the site and stuck with a label as a "Miscellaneous" sheet

In short: an interesting take on the song, but not an arrangement for the site.

[LeviR.star]

I hate to be a burden by bumping this sheet, but it's been over a month now.

Again, just a reminder that this is here.

[Static]

Nice arrangement here! Just a couple things:

- It should be in D Major, not G Major.
- m8 - Making the jump from this higher-range 16th run instantly to a low G is really difficult to do at 150bpm. Consider simplifying the run or putting in a different part entirely.
- m21 LH - E#s should be Fns.
- Lastly, consider making all of the pairs of 16ths in the RH just 8th notes. Playing it as written, especially in m1-8, is pretty taxing since you're repeatedly using your pinky or thumb for those.

[LeviR.star]

Nice arrangement here! Just a couple things:

- It should be in D Major, not G Major.
- m8 - Making the jump from this higher-range 16th run instantly to a low G is really difficult to do at 150bpm. Consider simplifying the run or putting in a different part entirely.
- m21 LH - E#s should be Fns.
- Lastly, consider making all of the pairs of 16ths in the RH just 8th notes. Playing it as written, especially in m1-8, is pretty taxing since you're repeatedly using your pinky or thumb for those.

A thousand thanks, Static! I can always count on your help!

Files updated. I swapped out the last 16th note in the LH of m8 for a 16th rest. Maybe I should take out the next 16th note, too?

[Maelstrom]

Song title fixed

[LeviR.star]

Thanks a bundle, Mael!

[Olimar12345]

Very well done! My only gripe is that the page two title isn't centered. Also, you don't have to change this for this sheet, but in the future I would consider using a D.C. at the end instead of a repeat bar, but either works.

[LeviR.star]

Thanks so much, Olimar! Files are fixed and ready to go, I believe.

[LeviR.star]

Double post: I fixed the LH beat 3 on m. 8 from a B to an A. Now it should be ready.

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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