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Author Topic: [DELETED] [PC] Hollow Knight - "Dirtmouth" by Halftone  (Read 174 times)

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[DELETED] [PC] Hollow Knight - "Dirtmouth" by Halftone
« on: May 21, 2017, 03:43:29 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Hollow Knight
Console: PC
Title: Dirtmouth
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Halftone
« Last Edit: May 21, 2017, 10:57:53 PM by Opsernaga »
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Re: [PC] Hollow Knight - "Dirtmouth" by Opsernaga
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2017, 05:11:20 PM »

Welcome to the forums!
Before we begin checking notes, there's a few housekeeping things I need to mention first.
1: It's nice to provide a youtube video with submissions to make checking them easier. It's no problem for this one, as I'll just grab it for you.
2: Review our formatting guidelines. While the sheet looks great, there's still a few things that need fixing like the "Score" and the Pno. marks, and the text formatting. If you want a template to copy+paste stuff into, just ask and I'll send you a copy of mine via a PM.

While you're at it, here's a few other things I noticed:
-Ped. marks aren't quite right. You just included the marks to begin pedal but not the mark to lift the pedal at the end of the measure. It looks like an asterisk.
-Chord at the end of m8 is unplayable. You could do it if you assigned the top note to the right hand instead.
-You've got a lot of white space at the bottom of pg 1. If you moved the measures around, you could fill that with a measure from the next page and in turn avoid having just one measure on the last page.

That's it for now.
« Last Edit: May 21, 2017, 05:17:13 PM by Maelstrom »
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Re: [PC] Hollow Knight - "Dirtmouth" by Halftone
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2017, 08:37:26 PM »

Arranger, you there?
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Re: [PC] Hollow Knight - "Dirtmouth" by Halftone
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2017, 08:11:46 PM »

Archiving due to inactivity. Feel free to resubmit with suggested changes.
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