- m. 2 & 4: Maybe you could add a grace note in the RH into beat 3, similar to the original.
I kinda wanted that, and I might put it in, but it sounded weird when I did before.
- m. 5-6: The LH is crying for some tom drum love. The silence is just uncanny.I know, and that was my main problem with the original, but it sounded so awkward when I tried...
I felt like maybe an actual drum beat should be put there, but I'm not able to. I might get help with it.
- m. 32: The bottom note of the RH dyads should be a B-nat.
Also, I'd turn the octaves into just single notes; that's a little heavy compared to the original.
Finally, the LH is missing an F-nat in the last beat.
Oops. Added, except as E#, not Fnat.
if you arrange Mega Man stuff I'll critique it
And I'll always respond to it!
Good job with these MM4 replacements, Waluigi! This site needs 'em.
I'm on it!
I'll try to take care of Bright Man...
Already one step ahead of you.