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Author Topic: [GBA] Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga - "Rookie & Popple" (Replacement) by Th3Gavst3r  (Read 474 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Rookie & Popple
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
« Last Edit: September 01, 2017, 03:37:47 AM by Maelstrom »
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Static arranged his own replacement not too long ago, and he's an updater now... this should be interesting...
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I don't think people typically get too mad about being preempted in submitting a replacement lol
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The repeated 16ths in the left hand are a bit much. Perhaps only keep the bass note for the first in each pair?
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Static arranged his own replacement not too long ago, and he's an updater now... this should be interesting...

I don't really mind, plus it's always good to have different arrangements floating around to compare and share ideas. It's nice to see another well-done arrangement here!

I like how you kept that other background voice, but it sounds a little muddy in the low register. The bass in general feels a lot heaver than it probably should. Also, like Latios mentioned, the 16ths are a little rough. All the notes and accidentals and stuff are good though.

EDIT: The title should be "Rookie & Popple" not "Popple Battle"
« Last Edit: March 25, 2017, 02:16:46 AM by Static »
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The repeated 16ths in the left hand are a bit much. Perhaps only keep the bass note for the first in each pair?
Made this change through most of the song. It sounded a bit empty when the bass is prominent though, so I added octaves to beat 1 to smooth things out some and tweaked measures 9, 25, and 27 slightly to get help from the RH. Also added the 5th to beat 1 of measures 11 and 13 for extra filling. Hopefully taking out half of the sixteenths helps with muddiness
Also changed M. 20 because of voice overlap I didn't notice before

The title should be "Rookie & Popple" not "Popple Battle"
I checked around the internet and it seems like YouTube soundtrack people are kind of split between the two. I went with "Popple Battle" because it's what's already on the site, but did you find an actual source for the title?

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I went with "Popple Battle" because it's what's already on the site
Never trust anything without the new URL on it :)
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Looking good, just a couple of things!
- Could try separating the bass line and the rest of the accompaniment, it gets a bit hard to see the direction at times
- m.26 beat 4.5 should have courtesy flats on the Bb's on top
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Seconding what Insig said, and then one other thing: edit the "D.C. al Fine" at the end to say just "D.C" since there is no specified "Fine."

Other than that, this sheet looks and sounds great!
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Bass separated, courtesy included, D.C. changed :D

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Looks great!

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This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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