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Author Topic: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf  (Read 258 times)

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Series: Golden Sun
Game: Golden Sun: The Lost Age
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Apojii Islands
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf
« Last Edit: May 22, 2017, 09:10:54 AM by Onionleaf »
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #1 on: April 29, 2017, 05:49:04 AM »

A simple, fun piece to play. :)

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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2017, 04:33:19 AM »

(And easy to check, too!)

Awesome job, just one quick thing - m. 3, second note in LH should be C not D. (Like in measure 5 and the other places!)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2017, 09:52:25 AM »

Whoops, I'll just go right ahead and fix that. Tyvm :)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2017, 05:07:24 AM »

Your last measure is missing a half rest in the right hand lmao
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2017, 09:24:08 AM »

Your last measure is missing a half rest in the right hand lmao

O.o What the-? How did that even... *sigh* I put it in its rightful place.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2017, 10:24:34 PM »

I wish my recent submissions posts were more insightful but it's your guys' fault for making such awesome sheets! This is perfect in my eyes.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2017, 11:42:03 PM »

There is no need to say that. As an updater, we can't use anyone's statement of "It's perfect"  as a justification to not give the sheet the normal checking we do. It's kinda useless to post stuff like that on multiple sheets.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #8 on: May 22, 2017, 12:04:33 AM »

Understood.

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I'm not in any way saying that updaters shouldn't check rigorously. It wasn't a justification for people not to check, rather my full evaluation on the changes made. I wanted to help, I looked through the scores, I conveyed my findings. I am wholly aware that they may not be incredibly useful, as I am unable to give particularly adept advice at such a stage.
It doesn't hurt to give a few smiles, though :) (That one is for you)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #9 on: May 22, 2017, 12:37:04 AM »

Hey, this looks really good, just one thing I would change:

- You should put crescendos above the tremolos, preferably going from p to mf. Doing this will make the tremolos more closely match the steel drums of the original.

Nice work!
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #10 on: May 22, 2017, 09:10:07 AM »

- You should put crescendos above the tremolos, preferably going from p to mf. Doing this will make the tremolos more closely match the steel drums of the original.

That's a great suggestion, thanks!

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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #11 on: May 22, 2017, 04:16:27 PM »

Great work, again!
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Apojii Islands" by Onionleaf
« Reply #12 on: May 22, 2017, 04:16:32 PM »

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