News:

Rest in pepperoni, Mario Mario, 1981 - 2021
He will be missed by all, except for me! WARIO, NUMBER ONE!

Main Menu

[DELETED] [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Deep Lyra Forest" by Trasdegi

Started by Zeta, March 19, 2017, 01:20:21 PM

Previous topic - Next topic

Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ranger
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Deep Lyra Forest
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Trasdegi


Latios212

Have you considered keeping the low notes (e.g. m. 1 beat 1) at their original octave? I think that's pretty important, and the jumps aren't terribly difficult as the song is relatively slow.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

Spoiler
[close]
turtle

Trasdegi

Yes, but if I do that on measure 1 beat 2 there would be the same G played simultaneously with the two hands, so is this a problem?

Latios212

What do you mean? Maybe I'm not listening closely enough right now but I don't hear the low voice on measure 1 beat 2 - I'm just suggesting moving the 16th notes down a few octaves.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

Spoiler
[close]
turtle

Trasdegi

Sorry, I was thinking of the 3rd 16th note on meadure 1, wich wold be exactly the same note as the 2nd 8th note of the low voice if moved down an octave, and I think than two octaves down would be too much.

Latios212

Two octaves down seems fine to me; isn't that where the voice is in the original anyway? (I can help with clef changes if that's a problem).
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

Spoiler
[close]
turtle

Trasdegi

I octaved the bass voice and added an octava down, so its not necessary to add a key change every two measures

PetrifiedLasagna

Ah the nostalgia.

It sounds like you may want to bring the notes that represent the flute an octave down. Also, don't forget to put a dynamic at the beginning of the song. Other than that, very solid arrangement.

Maelstrom


Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

Spoiler
[close]
turtle