[NES] Kirby's Adventure - "Orange Ocean" by Static

Started by Zeta, March 24, 2017, 07:25:25 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Adventure
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Orange Ocean
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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LeviR.star

Hey, sounds pretty good, Static! I love these KA arrangements of yours... :D

Oh, and nice use of the added-in dynamics. They make the arrangement more interesting.
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Latios212

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- I thought this was strange when I was playing it - I'm hearing an Ab instead of An near the end of measure 2.
- Measure 12 An->Bbb because descending chromatically to Ab?
- The other part where I suspected something was up - those Eb's in m. 14 should be D's. Same with 18.

Great sheet! I think the B section sounds cool with pedal, but maybe that's just me haha d: in any case nice work, and the three things I mentioned above all I have to say about the sheet.
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

All the things you mentioned have been fixed, and I also changed some articulations to make it a little more accurate/sound better.

Also, I do agree, the pedal works really nicely there, but in the original it still sounds separated so I didn't notate one. Kind of a performer's choice thing I think.

Thanks for the feedback!

Latios212

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