Wonderful job here. I'm just posting the things I've already mentioned to you over skype so that I don't forget them:
-Measures 1, 3, and 5 need to start on the up beat of 1, not on the down beat.
-As much as I would like that repeating turn figure to be a triplet, the way you have it now would probably be the easiest for a younger pianist to play correctly. Your call on keeping that as-is or writing it like a turn.
-Also, during the even-numbered reps of this, a grace note E is added before the 12th measure in the RH.
-Courtesy natural on the second D in measure 3 (LH) would be nice too.