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Author Topic: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi  (Read 310 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ranger
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Go-Rock Quads Encounter
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Trasdegi
« Last Edit: April 23, 2017, 05:09:50 AM by Latios212 »
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2017, 08:36:16 PM »

Pokémon Ranger should be capitalized.
Needs a dynamic marking.
C-naturals and E-flats in m. 3 and 7 should be B# and D#, respectively.
I'd make the F#/Eb dyad on beat 2 of m. 4 into either Gb against Eb or F# against D#, probably the former.

Of course, that's assuming all these pitches are correct, which I don't know because I didn't check yet

Nice arrangement though!
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2017, 08:37:16 PM »

Hi, welcome to NSM! First things first, please be sure to provide a Youtube link when you submit an arrangement, like the following:


Otherwise, your sheet is looking pretty good! I'd like to offer a couple suggestions for things to fix:
  • The game title should be spelled Pokémon Ranger, with a capital R
  • There's quite a bit of space in between each system. Perhaps you could move them a little closer together?
  • The copyright should probably include HAL Laboratory, in addition to Creatures, Inc.
  • The entire copyright/url text should be moved down a bit
I haven't gone and picked apart the music, but from what I can tell it sounds pretty accurate. Well done!

...and of course I'm ninja'd by someone else. Oh well.

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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2017, 09:48:30 PM »

I've updated the files, but since im an new with finale notepad (I usually use MuseScore) I don't know how to move systems.
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2017, 10:56:18 PM »

I have no idea how to use it either, dude. Don't worry :)

Link to the Finale Help thread where you can ask away! + people will have answers ;)
http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=9223.0
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2017, 12:22:47 AM »

Need some help w/ formatting? I'm always here! :D
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2017, 02:29:12 PM »

I found a way by exporting, editing in MuseScore and importing again in Finale notepad, so I updated the file.
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2017, 09:28:50 PM »

Ohhh yes Pokémon Ranger. Looking good so far! Some pointers:
- Is there any reason you don't have the other composer (Kinta Sato) listed? I haven't found any source that tells which composer composed what for this game.
- The key signature should be A major (three sharps).
- An arranging point to consider: When the bass moves from the A to the higher D/E in some measures, it jumps above the accompanying dyads, which is a bit strange. I would suggest considering either moving the dyads up or the bass down an octave to maintain consistency with the pattern present in m. 1 (which I like).
- Measure numbers are missing. If that's too much of a headache to implement I can put that in for you.
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #8 on: March 21, 2017, 12:15:04 PM »

I just updated the files, but I don't know why but the measure numbers disappears when I convert from MuseScore to notepad.
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #9 on: March 26, 2017, 05:43:44 AM »

May I edit your files then?
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2017, 11:55:01 AM »

Yes, of course
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2017, 12:45:12 AM »

Alright, checked this sheet and it's very good. Some minor things:
- The F# in the bass of m. 1? Sounds like it should just be A like the rest of the notes.
- RH beat 3 in measure 3 definitely shouldn't have a staccato.
- The bass changes up a bit in m. 10-11, which I think is worth writing in the sheet.

The above changes (as well as the formatting fix) are in this file here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/iw3hwn7nphlytz6/Go-Rock%20Quads%20Encounter.mus?dl=1

If everything is alright, you can update the submission with that~
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #12 on: April 05, 2017, 08:13:01 PM »

It seems alright to me too, so I updated the files. Oh, and thanks for the formatting! I find Finale notepad a bit harder than MuseScore to use...
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #13 on: April 23, 2017, 05:12:13 AM »

No problem! :P

Just real quick... I forgot to add in an opening dynamic and break the beam between beats 1 and 2 in m. 10 for consistency. I've updated the files for you.
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Re: [NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Go-Rock Quads Encounter" by Trasdegi
« Reply #14 on: April 23, 2017, 05:14:40 AM »

This arrangement rocks.
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