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Author Topic: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf  (Read 533 times)

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[GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« on: February 23, 2017, 10:02:34 AM »

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Series: Golden Sun
Game: Golden Sun: The Lost Age
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Ankohl Ruins
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf
« Last Edit: April 08, 2017, 09:58:06 AM by Onionleaf »
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2017, 10:05:22 AM »

☯ Ohmmmmm....

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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #2 on: February 26, 2017, 06:39:02 AM »

Ooh, nice looking sheet. Should be in E minor though. I'll check the notes at another time, but everything looks great! (Except the top margin is pretty small.)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2017, 06:36:06 AM »

Nooo problem, take your time with it. ;) I made those minor changes you noted.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2017, 02:00:04 AM »

A tip: Dotted notes are not illegal. Something probably happened to rebeam all the notes, but m9-16 and the final measure could really use dotted quarters in the bass.
Speaking of m9-16, have you considered moving the bass down an octave to remove that empty feel the song has now?
Again, with m9-16, some of those LH notes sound wonky in the original, but the song is so wonky I can't tell you if they're right or not. But it sounds fine with playback

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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2017, 08:50:34 AM »

Okie, understood.

Again, with m9-16, some of those LH notes sound wonky in the original, but the song is so wonky I can't tell you if they're right or not. But it sounds fine with playback

Haha, those were my thought patterns as well. ^^ If it's of any reassurance, I do use MIDI rips as references for all Golden Sun arrangements (which is basically cheating, but hey it helps a bunch!). I went through and double-checked all notes again in that section and it's all okay, despite its awkwardness.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2017, 01:37:23 PM »

And one final thing:
You can't have dotted quarters that start on the offbeat (e.g. m9 b1.5) because it obfuscates the beat. SOrry I didn't specify. The ones that start on b1 are fine, though. (don't forget the last measure when you fix these)

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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2017, 08:58:25 AM »

Oookie, no problem. (Huh, I was so sure I've added offbeat dotted quarters to accepted sheets before, but maybe I'm recalling a sheet in compound time?)

Files are updated. :)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #8 on: April 03, 2017, 03:10:54 AM »

Tiny aesthetic things - I think the dotted lines in m. 1 and 5 aren't strictly necessary especially since the notes are so close; it's a little cluttery in m. 1. Is that a staccato left over in m. 5? (There should be a dot for the abbreviated cresc... but that looks too big :P)
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #9 on: April 08, 2017, 10:03:22 AM »

Is that a staccato left over in m. 5? (There should be a dot for the abbreviated cresc... but that looks too big :P)

Lol! A ninja dot! :o It has been dealt with.
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Re: [GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Ankohl Ruins" by Onionleaf
« Reply #10 on: April 08, 2017, 12:00:29 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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