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Author Topic: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan  (Read 299 times)

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[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« on: February 22, 2017, 06:33:17 AM »

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Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Dusk Dunes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan
« Last Edit: April 03, 2017, 02:20:25 AM by mastersuperfan »
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2017, 06:34:16 AM »


Quite possibly my favorite track in the game... and also a pain to arrange.

(also enharmonic spellings what even)
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2017, 07:23:35 PM »

The first thing(s) I notice when I look at the sheet:
The large amount of white space at the bottom of pg 1.
And that this is a cool song.

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2017, 08:18:56 PM »

The first thing(s) I notice when I look at the sheet:
The large amount of white space at the bottom of pg 1.

Moved everything down a bit to alleviate that. There's still some white space down there, but any more and we're just going to end up with a large amount of white space at the top instead.
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2017, 06:50:44 PM »

Discussed over Skype, and we've made a few changes. Very neat sheet. Cool chords.
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2017, 01:52:02 AM »

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2017, 05:26:28 AM »

This looks fantastic, just a few small changes to be made:

- m2, 6 LH: Bb on beat 2.25 should be A# because the bassline there is ascending chromatically.
- m18, 22, 42 RH: Bb grace notes should be A#s.

Another thing I would suggest is to add a tiny bit more dynamic variety. I understand it's a bit odd to incorporate that in a jazzy rock style like this, but I would suggest starting out mf, crescendoing in m4, and then have measure 5 till the end be forte. This is just a suggestion though, the arrangement works perfectly fine dynamically as is, but just something to think about if you want.

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #7 on: March 26, 2017, 03:11:42 PM »

- m2, 6 LH: Bb on beat 2.25 should be A# because the bassline there is ascending chromatically.
- m18, 22, 42 RH: Bb grace notes should be A#s.

I'm inclined to agree with you on m2 and m6, but I'm still not sure about the grace notes because of all the Bb's everywhere else. For example, see m9-10, where m9 ends on a Bb and m10 starts with a Bb grace note. A# seems a little out of place to me there. I'm not saying you're wrong (I could very well be mistaken here), but I'm not yet sure about making this change. Maybe another person could give their input?
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #8 on: April 03, 2017, 01:03:33 AM »

I definitely say A#. Yes, it may seem out of place, but this better demonstrated the upwards progression in note names, not just actual notes. E.g. A#-B sounds better than Bb-B. It's also a heck of a lot easier to sight read.
Just my 2 cents.

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2017, 01:05:19 AM »

No criticism from me here; just wanted to say that I love these Epic Yarn sheets of yours. ;D
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2017, 02:21:00 AM »

I definitely say A#. Yes, it may seem out of place, but this better demonstrated the upwards progression in note names, not just actual notes. E.g. A#-B sounds better than Bb-B. It's also a heck of a lot easier to sight read.
Just my 2 cents.

Updated.

No criticism from me here; just wanted to say that I love these Epic Yarn sheets of yours. ;D

Thanks! ^.^
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #11 on: April 03, 2017, 02:26:07 AM »

Yay! Glad to see this one done!
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Dusk Dunes" by mastersuperfan
« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2017, 02:26:11 AM »

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