Now just a last couple comments after listening through once or twice:
- How about putting m. 3 in bass clef for the LH?
- Move the cresc. away from the p a bit in measure 3.
- Voicing in m. 9 - this seems a bit odd here. I'd put the D on beat 2.5 in the RH and make the A on beat 2 a dotted half, seeing as this is the only place in the sheet where you have rests on the lower staff.
- The last D in m. 13 I would suggest putting in the RH instead of the LH. And I don't hear the B there.
It's hard for me to tell what they are. I ended up adding a G and B to it as well, but idk if that's right
Try taking out the B from the LH since you already have one in the RH.