[Wii] Super Mario Galaxy - "Lava Path" by E. Gadd Industries

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Galaxy
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Lava Path
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: E. Gadd Industries

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[E. Gadd Industries]

[Latios212]

- The LH beat 1 pattern present in m. 1-2 seems like it should continue throughout. I'd put that in measures 3-10, and for 11-16 I'd rearticulate the first bass note on beat 1.5 (same rhythm as before).
- Key change to Bb minor at m. 11.
- Last few measures, noticing a few errors in LH, here's what I hear (would recommend using 8vb here):

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- I'm not sure if that chord in m. 23 is right, might be worth another check. Otherwise, notes are good.

[E. Gadd Industries]

- The LH beat 1 pattern present in m. 1-2 seems like it should continue throughout. I'd put that in measures 3-10, and for 11-16 I'd rearticulate the first bass note on beat 1.5 (same rhythm as before).
- I'm not sure if that chord in m. 23 is right, might be worth another check. Otherwise, notes are good.

Just as a status update for myself, and I also have a question...:
-So you're saying take the 3 notes in LH beat 1 m1-2 & apply the same rhythm scheme or the exact same notes through 10, and then what do you mean about rearticulation?
-I still need to check the m23 chord.

[Latios212]

Yeah, I meant the beat 1 figure (D-D-A) sounds like it continues instead of changing to just D-D. You can paste that in up to 10. Past that, by rearticulate I meant just play the note again on beat 1.5. So, same bass pattern as before, just transposed. (Might want to briefly check that in the original, but that's what I was hearing last time).

[E. Gadd Industries]

Everything has been updated. As far as the m23 chord goes, I took another listen, and I ****think**** I have it correct now, but chords aren't my strongsuit, by any means.

[Maelstrom]

I like m23 as it is now.
2 final little nitpicks:
Double barline needed at the key change in m11
Maybe move the dynamic away from the barline slightly in m3?

Great sheet, btw.

[E. Gadd Industries]

I like m23 as it is now.

Awesome!

Double barline needed at the key change in m11
Maybe move the dynamic away from the barline slightly in m3?

Fixed & fixed

Great sheet, btw.

Thank you!

[Latios212]

Yay!

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