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Author Topic: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 1949 times)

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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #45 on: February 18, 2018, 06:38:12 PM »

woops
Here it is.
I just edited the bassline and added slurs for grace notes, so you can probably copy+paste that line in
« Last Edit: February 18, 2018, 06:40:39 PM by Maelstrom »
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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #46 on: March 17, 2018, 09:58:30 PM »

Bump for arranger.
Let's finish this up.

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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #47 on: March 17, 2018, 10:17:27 PM »

*quickly dashes into the corner and hides behind half-yearly exams*
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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #48 on: March 17, 2018, 10:32:08 PM »

You can run but you can't hide.
Well ok maybe you can hide.

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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #49 on: April 10, 2018, 04:28:59 PM »

bump for arranger. We're nearly at the delete for inactivity point so just finish it already

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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #50 on: April 11, 2018, 10:14:57 AM »

can't delete for inactivity if there's still a bit of activity

Updated the files with a version that includes Mael's bassline (which managed to not be there before oops).

I still have school right now, but next week I'll be free-ish, so I'll work on it more then.
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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #51 on: April 14, 2018, 01:03:48 AM »

As it turns out I have no idea what I'm doing. Then again I've never had any idea of what I'm doing, so whatever I did is probably the usual bunch of errors... multiplied by 7.

Files updated with edits of the accompaniment lines for the final section.
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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #52 on: April 14, 2018, 05:04:14 AM »

woops
Here it is.
I just edited the bassline and added slurs for grace notes, so you can probably copy+paste that line in
Err, grace note lines are still amiss. We can edit that in for you if you want.

Other passing suggestions:
- Omit the G# in piano 2 m. 33 RH? It's a slight stretch, and piano 1 already has that note.
- Measure 39-40 are fine to emphasize, but I'm not much a fan of the octave tripling in piano 1 - it feels a bit out of place to me. Would you be willing to try something else there?
- I'd suggest a clef change for piano 1's right hand from measure 37 to 45.
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Re: [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Rainbow Road (Two Pianos)" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #53 on: April 15, 2018, 10:35:39 AM »

Err, grace note lines are still amiss. We can edit that in for you if you want.
Oops. Should be fixed now.

- Omit the G# in piano 2 m. 33 RH? It's a slight stretch, and piano 1 already has that note.
Done.

- I'd suggest a clef change for piano 1's right hand from measure 37 to 45.
I'm going to assume you meant left hand. Done.

- Measure 39-40 are fine to emphasize, but I'm not much a fan of the octave tripling in piano 1 - it feels a bit out of place to me. Would you be willing to try something else there?
I definitely see what you mean. The clef change emphasises this point too lol. Unfortunately my brain is kinda fried, so I'm not sure what to do there right now. Feel free to offer suggestions. I'll be sure to change it.

Thanks.
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My final feedback for this song. This will be unorganized.
m3,6,7 RH1 - You have staccato quarters on the off beat. Shouldn't those be 8ths then? Also in m33/35/37  RH2

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I get why you notated it like this, but it's hard to read the rhythm instinctively with an off beat dotted q. Also in m12 in RH2, m16 LH2, and probably elsewhere.

system of m29 LH2 - that 8vb mark is quite close to those 8th notes....

Aaaaand that's all from me. Great job, this is finally coming together
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