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Author Topic: [MUL] Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U - "Opening" by Tobbeh99  (Read 144 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Opening
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Tobbeh99
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Re: [MUL] Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U - "Opening" by Tobbeh99
« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2017, 01:31:05 AM »

Thought I might submit this song even though of my comment. I still hang around here, from time to time. And don't think that this arrangement is perfect, and that it needs some "fine-tuning" and maybe some discussions concerning various things before it is ready to go. So that's why the decision.

-I edited the ending so that it is now much easier to read. I also think the notation fits better with the rest of the arrangement.

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10/10 tobbeh

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Re: [MUL] Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U - "Opening" by Tobbeh99
« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2017, 01:00:59 PM »

bump-di-i-bump.
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It's very nice indeed. Just a couple things I can give you right off the top:

-Measure 17, RH: You've got some augmentation dots running over the natural sign here. Maybe spread that out a tad.
-Measure 23, both hands, beats 2 and 3: Rhythm here I'm pretty certain is two dotted eighths followed by a standard eighth (notated correctly of course). I could've sworn (up till now) that this rhythm was in the previous few measures as well, but it's more debatable in those cases and I can't say that you're wrong with the way you have them there. Here though, I think I've got enough surety in myself to conclude as I do.
-^Above comment also applies to measure 31.
-Section E, melody: There are places in here where the melody has some anticipations that are lacking in your score. Find them and incorporate them please.

But overall a fabulous job; well done.
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