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Author Topic: [DELETED] [MUL] Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U - "Super Mario World Medley" by ThatHiddenCharact  (Read 274 times)

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Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Super Mario World Medley
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter
« Last Edit: March 22, 2017, 12:29:03 AM by ThatHiddenCharacter »
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We've said before, formatting needs to be fixed before submitting...

I'm sorry I haven't taken the time to help you out yet as I've been very busy lately, but this shouldn't be on the submissions board.
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I thought I did have the formatting fixed. What's wrong?

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Aside from other minor things, there's missing measure numbers and the numerous one-measure systems.

http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=9088.msg363411#msg363411
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When I fix the problems, I won't be able to make a pdf. I had to have a friend make it because she has the full version of finale.

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But can you fix them, though? It's fine if you just update the .mus file until we accept it. When that happens, I'm sure someone (maybe myself) would love to help you out with the PDF.
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Actually, before I fix the formatting, I'm trying to fix harmonies. Here's my personal arrangement thread with the latest variant. I'm having a bad time with the harmonies and could use some insight. Once I fix all the notes, then I can fix the formatting.
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I finally updated the mus and midi with the formatting fixes, but I still can't make a pdf with notepad.
It's fine if you just update the .mus file until we accept it. When that happens, I'm sure someone (maybe myself) would love to help you out with the PDF.
Can you, please? I just need help with the pdf for this song, in the future, I have a friend who can help me out.

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Here, use this. It's the same PDF converter that I've used for all my sheets.

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Here, use this. It's the same PDF converter that I've used for all my sheets.
Oh my god, thank you! That is a huge help! I'm extremely excited now! I've updated the PDF!

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Could we get a video link please?
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I can't believe I forgot to do that! Sorry.

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Some preliminary things...
- Koji Kondo composed all the original songs. Hiroshi Okubo is the arrangement supervisor.
- Your notes are flipped oddly in a lot of places. Rule of thumb is the stems should face away from the note furthest from the center of the staff. So that means m. 3-4 (RH) should be flipped. Look out for other places as well.
- Rhythm groupings - when dealing with rhythms involving 16th notes always be sure to show every beat. So m. 55+ will need to be fixed, as beat 4 is obscured.

Now to start looking at the beginning...
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- Harmonies wrong in m. 1-2. Specifically beats 3-4 are parallel sixths, not fifths. What you have for beats 1-2 would work since it's in the right chord but, definitely need to change the bottom notes in 3-4.
- m. 3-4 - LH an octave too high. If that was by choice, you still need to be consistent with the rest of the sheet. It jumps back down to its original octave in m. 5.
- In this section I would strongly suggest cutting out the middle note in each of the RH chords for two reasons - this makes the sheet sound "lighter" like the original, and successive chords are more difficult and tiring to play than just dyads.
- Some notes definitely need staccatos. Like the first note of m. 6. See other places in the picture.
- Biggest issue - harmonies in general. I've re-transcribed m. 9-12 quickly and got something more along the lines of what you see above.

Given everything that I've found at the beginning I would strongly suggest giving the whole sheet another close look.
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I updated the score based on Latios's suggestions. I would've updated the files sooner, but I was having trouble with measure spacing in Notepad. Luckily, my good friend, E. Gadd, helped me out with that.
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