Alright, those chords are technically right, but the wrong inversions.
Here is a straight transcription of the first 3 chords (in the first 6 measures) without your adjusted octaves:
Given this, you have 4 options:
1: Go with what you have, even though it's not quite right. Probably not the best one.
2: Adjust the octaves for playability. Will bring them a bit too close together. Ok choice.
3: Leave it as I just wrote it. Will make it harder to play. Best choice if playability is not a concern. Otherwise, not that great.
4: Be creative. I'm sure there's another possibility, but I don't know it now.