[GBC] Kirby Tilt 'n' Tumble - "Underground" by LeviR.star

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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Tilt 'n' Tumble
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Underground
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star

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[LeviR.star]

(Video Updated on 1-7-17)

Since I recently got Finale 2014, this is my first submission to include a .musx file!

From now one, I'm going with a pattern; submitting two sheets from the same series/franchise every month. My next sheet is either going to be "Program Rhythm (Puzzle Room) from Kirby: Planet Robobot, or Kirby's Dream Land 3's "Level 1: Grass Land".

[LeviR.star]

I just looked back at this, and need some advice concerning --

- slurs. I'm afraid I have some where they aren't needed, and some that are needed but not there (if that makes any sense )
- articulation. Same sort of deal up here. ^ I'm still practicing.
- Measure count per line. I just realized now that I forgot to even out the number of measures on each line. Would that make things better, or is it even necessary in this case?

[Sebastian]

- slurs. I'm afraid I have some where they aren't needed, and some that are needed but not there (if that makes any sense )

I think your slurs look fine and correctly placed.

- articulation. Same sort of deal up here. ^ I'm still practicing.

Same. Well-placed. Kirby songs are known for being realllly detached, so I think you did just fine.

- Measure count per line. I just realized now that I forgot to even out the number of measures on each line. Would that make things better, or is it even necessary in this case?

Hmmm, I know of a way you could improve it.
You could just do four 4 measure systems and rearrange all the systems to look like this:

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Remember to make sure nothing is clashing. You can move staffs around so that no slurs are clashing with anything. Use the staff tool for this.

As for the notes, they are all correct.

[LeviR.star]

I think your slurs look fine and correctly placed.
Same. Well-placed. Kirby songs are known for being realllly detached, so I think you did just fine.
Hmmm, I know of a way you could improve it.
You could just do four 4 measure systems and rearrange all the systems to look like this:

Spoiler

[close]

Remember to make sure nothing is clashing. You can move staffs around so that no slurs are clashing with anything. Use the staff tool for this.

As for the notes, they are all correct.

Thank you for the help, Sebastian! I'll get onto this as soon as I get home (which will be a while from now, what with Large Group Speech practice and Pep Band interfering )

[LeviR.star]

All fixed now! Any further feedback would be appreciated.

[Maelstrom]

Nice sheet!
2 things:
1: Click on measure 3 again. There is a spacing issue there, and finale will fix it if you just click on it with the note entry tool.
2: The video you posted is wonky. Try this one instead.

[LeviR.star]

Nice sheet!

Thanks! I appreciate it!

2 things:
1: Click on measure 3 again. There is a spacing issue there, and finale will fix it if you just click on it with the note entry tool.
2: The video you posted is wonky. Try this one instead.

Alrighty! All updated and ready to go! (You never can trust some OST, can you?)

[Latios212]

(You never can trust some OST, can you?)

Always use caution when dealing with soundtracks put on YouTube. Bad sound quality, incorrect looping, pitch shifting, you name it...

Nice sheet!

Oh, I hate to be a bother with things like this... but the slash is missing at the end of the URL. I can add it in for you if you want. The rest is good, and we'll accept once that's done.

[LeviR.star]

Oh, I hate to be a bother with things like this... but the slash is missing at the end of the URL. I can add it in for you if you want. The rest is good, and we'll accept once that's done.

Ok, I went and added the slash to the URL. Did I do it right?

[Maelstrom]

Not on the PDF at least. It should end with .org/

[LeviR.star]

Not on the PDF at least. It should end with .org/

Oh! Thought we were still talking about the video. I fixed the .mus, .pdf, and .musx files with the correct copyright information. All good to go now!

[Maelstrom]

Good to go now.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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