Farewell Hyrule King
- M. 1-16 (LH): The first notes of each of these seem to have more force than the others. Maybe you could accent them.
Done. Also accented some of the notes in Layer 1 since sometimes they're equally forceful.
- M. 17-21 (LH): You're missing the added octave. For example:
Must've missed them the first time through. Added. (With the exception of m18 because I still don't hear it there.)
- M. 22 (LH): There is an Eb in there you're missing.
It's still difficult for me to hear, but I think you're right. Added.
- M. 17-24 (LH): Same as M. 1-16. Seems like some of these notes are almost being pounded; that's how accented they are, especially the eighth notes on beat 4 of M. 23.
Instead of adding accents, I changed the mezzo forte to a forte in m19-20 since those two measures seem to be particularly strong. I think the crescendo is good enough for m21-23, but I did add accents on the two eighth notes in m23.
But yeah. I love it! I am gonna add this song to my three-ring binder for sure.
(I also played around a bit more in the second half, changing the pedal markings in m27, m29, and m31, and changing the dynamics to be stronger.)